Tips : Depends what you want outta rap man.
You wanna get on stage rippin songs?
You wanna battle cunts at like KOTD?
You wanna impress your mates wif freestyles?
You just wanna write as a release for anger?
Let me know ill tell ya what u need to work on

Ayo u want a rematch?

If you want tips msg me, trust im not hatin when i say u need em

Not doin battles no more man.. jus tracks vids n cyphs.. if u want a topical battle, hit me up

ah dogg lets make up a crew

ill get at it soon bruhz

go on send it then

Send 8 son

Your a multi account cheating bastard.. i can tell.. fuckhead send me abttle and get merked.. i got more skillz blind with writetnz, and more skillz mute wit audio than u got with 4 hands and two mouths

Send me a battler fucker.. i am hatin you cant vote for shit

just some information, new kid...
You dont give people anythinglower than a 5 without explaining it. Especially when you yourself arent experienced at constructing a good verse.