Not bad, fam...not bad at all. Need more delivery/energy with your delivery. You should get into the Discord shit... maybe do a few audio battles here first but it’s worth checking out. Keep at it, man! 

First drop.. tryna get into the audio game..all feedback welcome..negative and positive..i also need to no how to get rid of that static in the background.

This gon be a hard finish..BASICALLY JOB IS DONE, cuz "everything Brick Laying is concrete" N that's MASONRY 101! So don't think YA'LL SCARING ME cuz I got "more assault cases" than RON JEREMY! IM AIRING 3,..WARNING SHOTS!..the next one gon' sound the alarm like MORNING CLOCKS! I'm ticked off MORE THAN HOT, "Hang around..y'all gon' see wat I got in store" ..and it ain't the CORNER SPOT! The  FOUR'LL POP! "Fly into my trap" it'll be a HORROR SHOP, think it's a game of COURSE ITS NOT, "force my hand the wrong way" no CONTORTION PROP! '40 for the Homie' but I won't POUR A DROP, "my sight seein sumthin different" n it's not where TOURISTS FLOCK, aiming for your pockets n make SURE THE SHOT hittin money every time BEFORE I STOP "leaving holes in ya paper"..training COURSE FOR COPS cuz "I'll take the life out of a body" like aBORTION DOCS!!

Word..@2feul thanks for the feedback..yea  I plan on battling on the discord after I get where I wanna be

They said what I was gonna say delivery wise. The pauses could take a bit of impact out of your bars but for your first drop, your shit sounds pretty damn good. I like how you write. One thing I noticed was that all your best material was more towards the beginning and you slowed up a bit. Probably just a case of "I wanna finish the verse so I can hurry up and record" haha nothing wrong with that ive done it before. Anyways, good shit man. Stay bar heavy, no light bars

Nice multis audio was a lil rough. Try standing back further from da mic. Respect 

Dope drop here, very well arranged with some exciting high-points...punches were solid and consistent, delivery was good as well...get that energy up. Fire cypher, DIMED! Keep up the excellent work! 👽

good solo cypher brickrepper,appreciate good raps