For anyone that's confused about the first Bar, an OASIS is a body of water in the desert, which can be deceiving to the eye, hence the (eye),(sea) (see) wordplay, and why's it's crazy to step to me

Ok, solid spar here...definitely an entertaining read, going with Dartz here...a lot more consistent with his structure, good jabs and decent wordplay (just be sure that its grammatically sound, natural and works both ways)...which brings me to my next point, which is why LadyKarma missed the mark...the wordplay was there, yet it didnt work both ways, not was it grammatically sound and rather forced...work on your setups and create heavier punches.

Dope battle, good material...happy holidays 

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Okay... Imma just say darts took this for me. I'll explain in a while. 

Darts, your adolescent bars was sick. Rhyming a bit rickety but good verse nonetheless.

Now lady- I like your initiative for bringing wordplay galore but you know why you lost? Cos you didn't utilize them 100% how it's meant to be utilized.

The thing about wordplay, especially oronyms is that it's gotta work BOTH WAYS to make sense. 

An example- eminem once said something about a battle then dropped this "now I'm screaming attack like I just stepped on one". The wordplay is A-Tack(as in a pin) / attack- the fighting kind.

If I write "now I'm screaming A-Tack, like I just stepped on one" do you see the sentence still makes sense?That's how you should do it.

Now check out your bars when I bring the wordplays out.

"oasis, eye was never your dolphin, it's crazy what you sea". ???!?!

you see? Tf does that even mean? I get the initiative, I know what you tryna do but I'm just telling you that you didn't do it well. You can't just dobble and squeeze the fuck outta them into your verse without thinking about that. That's why vets don't use wordplay much except it's for a Haymaker or a set up to one. 

Overall, your octa puss line is your best. And yo rhymes were boring cos you lost focus paying more attention to those plays. 

So. Work on that. 

This battle was hella close but I could see where my winner was coming from with their metaphors and the way they tried to flip there words around. Very nice Oasis bar