KILLERS.  da fuk outta here

freestyle ( with one or two pre meds ;D ) 

Jay Lens garage ( Jay Leno ) 

this dude a real HEAD ASS, queef smoke already posted this verse as an open FREESTYLE , which is why i thought it would probablly makes sense to reply with one ? no wonder why i thought u had pre meds haha , well what eva , heres my verse :

bitch say my name and im a danger to ya health , the det game you wanna play ? means only craters in ya wealth,

you fickle fuck , i'll trip him up send him skatin off the shelf , i'll make it plus 1 more body you get neighboured with the elf

, i'll make his face into a belt when i skin him with my knuckles tucked , around a bayonet grippin-livid then i double up - to stick you in a puddle blud, then pick ya fkn mother up , bust her with the shovel then i'll stuff her in a duffel , cunt ! ...rock him with the sucker punch , cocks yea? you suck a bunch..thats why u spittin bollocks while ya box is gettin knuckle fucked , you dont bring the trouble much ...at times ya speakin double dutch .. you'll prize this body bag like , sleepin with a snuggle rug!..

D a demon - blowin smoke how i puff the cones , you soundin like you chomp a bag of dick so adjust ya tone..you packin up the chrome? i'll bring a bat dipped in acid fam so every fkn hit yo feel the sting like a classic fan , you wrappin up some up cabbage man, ya flows are are tossin salad stance , sabotage his coat and then explode him like the Taliban , these tapes'll make you vanish get him taken a famished land , ya chose decapitation how they do it back in Pakistan,

 ya graves set to large, his fat cadaver couldnt fit in Jay Lens garage ( jay leno ) see him chillin in the whip? i'll then break the glass , pull him out by his fkn neck and straight dent ya mask

who the fuck u think u rhymin with? i,ll slice him round the throat , we'll see him crease up at the scene and then he'll cry about the votes... u fkn punk, you think your Bison but this dykes a fuckin joke, i'll uppercut him to to the sky til he's enlightened like the pope , ma lines are dope , out-rhyme the smoke , this clown aint got the slightest hope , cos fuck around with D and i'll break him down to isotopes

Nice one detrimental. Rhyme smoke came hard but this one was brutal. Appreciate the shout out as well. Heh heh

Dm knows what's up....bodybag.

man this was close..Rhyme had dat flow n persistence, but Detris horror verse went harder fv is here

Win or lose on here don't really matter. Kats don't be paying attention enough to realize  No hate DM...you be spitting. But c'mon you gonna disrespect me and freestyle? And not one punch. I usually don't do this but here's my verse. Punch after punch with the whole verse being REAL personal...

FLAMES GONNA MELT BUBBLED SCARS IS WHAT I LEFT YOU WIT/

YA NAME TO YA HEALTH FROM MY BARS WHAT IT REPRESENTS/ (DETRIMENTAL TO YA HEALTH)

DETRI IT MAKES SENSE SEE

CHOP OFF ALL YA LIMBSALL FUCKIN BARK NOW REALLY YOUS A DEADTREE(DETRI=DEAD TREE)

NOW IL GOT YA WIFEY NUMB OFF THE COKE DIPPIES

And CRAZY HOW MUCH SHE SQUIRTS OFF SHE SOO PISSY

AN FRANKLY IM THE REASON SHE IN A GOOD MOOD YOU SHOULD THANK ME

IN A JIFFY NOBODY PEE NUT BUT HER CALL HER SKIPPY(PEANUT BUTTER... WHOLE SETUP WAS 🔥)

Dumb asss CALL YASLEF HALF ASSED WHEN YA  THROWIN ME SHOTS(CALLED HIS VERSES HALF ASSED ON MY PAGE WHEN HE CALLED ME OUT)

BARS IS YA DEFEAT( DA FEET) THIS BEAT IS THE SOCKS

YOU RUNT A THE LITTA TREAT YA VERSE LIKE THE SHITTA

ONLY TIME YOU FUCKIN POUND IS WITH YA TWITTA FINGAS

SOMETIMES YOU A SWALLOWER SOMETIMES YOU A SPITTER

LURKES N POPS BACK UP LIKE HERPES PEEP THIS STINGA

GOT JERKED IN THE SCHEME TOURNEY FROM BANHATTAN LAST WINTA(LOST TO MANHATTAN LAST WINTER IN THE SCHEME TOURNY)

BEATIN WONT STOP BOOM BAP

WATCH AS I LOOP IT (MURDERED YOU ON THIS BEAT. AND HE RECOMMENDED IT TO ME ON MY PAGE. HAD TO LOOP THE SHIT OUT OF IT, BECAUSE THE ACTUAL BEAT WAS ONLY 30 SECONDS)

U GOT PEE SHOOTA BARS STUPID NOW WATCH AS I NUKE IT-

CAT 5 WINDS COULDNT DROP ME MY ROOTS ARE  SO FUCKIN ROOTED

FAGS A CANDLE EVEN IN LIGHT BREEZE SUCKIN JUST BLEW IT

YA MOTHA CANT HANDLE YEAH SHES PISSIN ALOT

NEED TO STOP LISTEN UP CAUSE YOU MISSIN THE PLOT

CLEANIN MY SHIT STAINS FROM YA SHEETS THATS YOU HITTIN THE SPOT(YOU AINT FUCKIN YA WIFE...I AM. AND CLEANIN MY SHIT STAINS FROM THE NEXT BAR)

I MAKE A GROSS FACE WHEN SHE MAKES THE O FACE

THE ONLY TIME THE CUM IS WHEN I SHIT IN HER TWAT(ROFL)

YUCK YOUR A DUMB FUCK FOR BELIEVIN

THAT I WOULD EVER BE DUCKIN(SAID I WAS DUCKIN)

ITS ONLY ONE DUCK THIS SEASON MY BARS WERE CLEVERLY HUNTIN

YOU SOFT BUTTER BITCH MY BARS ARE DA HOT KNIFE

9NLY TIME YOU BLOW DOUGH IS WHEN YOU. COOLIN OFF A SLICE.

ONLY TIME YOU GOT THE SCOPE ON THE TOP A DA HEAT YOU FAKA

IS WHEN YOU GOT YA MOUTH WASH IS ON TOP THE RADIATOR

HARD FOR YOU TO BREATH WEASEL YOU GONNA NEED MORE THAN A RESPIRATOR

GODS GONNA SEE YOU FECAL SEND YOU BACK TO YOUR CREATOR

SEND YA BACK TO THAT SHITTY BOX TRASH TWAT THAT SHAT YA

OR SEND YOU  BACK TO WHOS EVER DIRTY BALLSACK YOU CAME ATA

IM RAPPIN FOR MY FANS

WHY YOU STILL RAPPIN FOR RAPPAS

KNOWIN ITS NOT WITH YOU ITS ATCHA WHEN YOU HEAR THE LAUGHTA

FROM THE GATE I BEEN TIGHTEN UP THE SLACK ON THIS SLACKA

CAUSE ITS ALWAYS BEEN A FACT YOU AINT NEVER BEEN A FACTA

MORTUARY TO YA BURIAL IS THE

ONLY TIME THAT YA DRIVEN

CAUSE EVEN YA SO CALLED BEST

IS A PINCHED OFF DEUCE YOU DONT EVEN PUSH WHEN YOU SHITTIN(CMON NOW!...BARS)

EVERYTHING AINT AUTOMATIC SOMETIMES YOU NEED THAT PUSH DOG

EVERY WIN IS I WAS BORN TO HAVE IT

ITS MINES BELIEVE I PUSH HARD

Rhymesmoke Again Back TO MAKE THE SITE HOT AGAIN

GO HEAD AND TALK SHIT AND GET YA BIG HEAD POPPED AGAIN

THINK YOU BOLDER BUT ROCKED AGAIN

YOU CAN STEP UP BUT GET DROPPED AGAIN

THIS CLEAN UPS GONNA SUCK WHOEVER GOTTA MOP YA FRIENDS

BODIED YOU SON...YOU ONLY GET ONE. MY QUALITY KINDA SUCKS BUT REAL TALK...KILLED IT. 

i felt that " decapitate you like they do back in pacistan " bar , good battle but i say what edged it was detri was more consistent with the more complex schemes 

Bowser's..this is 🔥 on both sides..I had to listen a few times. Nice beat smoke..I liked the dead tree wordplay punch..the pee nut but her was a nice..I was hoping you were use the word jiffy in there..but still cool scheme and word play..I also liked the O face(office space).lol.. only time you fuckin pound is with ya twitta fingas was funny and cool..you had some dope setups..great flow and delivery and you stayed consistent the whole 2 minutes..your ending was dope..overall great listen..to many bars to go over all them..

Dope beat..got that spookness to it..you both had 🔥 drops..detri you took a little long to start ya verse. But ya bars made up for that..I liked ya opener verse the plus 1 neighbored with the elf.dope punch..you next sheme was 🔥..from begining knuckle tucked to box is getting knuckle fucked..you..and the verse after that was dope to me as well especially from acid fam classic fan explode him like the taliban how they do it back in Pakistan.. 🔥..the brick top from snatch was funny..a little filler..lol the Jay lens garage was cool..ya ending was nice enlighten like the Pope..but ya actual ending was okay..I thoughtaybe you had one or 2 more bars after isotope that you weren't able to fit in.. ending with isotope sounded a little awakrd to me.. doesn't take away from ya..overalll fire listen..

Ok listened to both ya cats too many times.and I was going back and fourth was a winner..first it was one guy and then a few more listens it was another guy..I felt both of you came creative with ya pen game. One started a little late out the gate which I deducted half a point and had some filler at the end and deducted another point.. the other guy had a couple played bars that I wasn't feeling..Soni deducted a point..I liked ones style a bit more cause he has that Grimes voice to him...but overall I got one barely shining by..good battle..

Detri had much better flow and his rhymes were non-stop. RhymeSmoke made more of an attempt at personal punches, but most seemed a bit forced. 

Damn yall.. literally had to hear this like 5 times. Ya'll are likem my two fave MCs on the site so I hope noone takes offense. Smoke always comes with his in your face, disrespectful, gutta style. Detri always super clean with his flow and multies  mixed with the hard punches. Best bars:

Detri/dead tree cutting off limbs

skatin off the shelf// make it plus 1 you get neighboured with the elf

Those the looney to me. Overall, I had to pick a reaosn to edge something to one of yall, and the only thing I can think was use of vocab. One simply rhymed a little more complex and his writing was more intricate with the interweeving of bars. I think this may be the first time I ever vote against rhymesmoke... Yall... plz... run another one back!

shiiiit ... aint been a battle with 6 votes in a while 

goddamn good ass battle here yall good battle fair vite no h8

This was a blow out victory speech for the winner the loser lost bad........ MAY THE BEST BARS PREVAIL!!