another fire beat from prince im vibin with , your still talkin down the mic tho and need to find some bounce in the flow. M Rock came with his thang yo n shit be smooth and stacked with flowing jabs , the beat is gangsta . fv 

Ehhhh ...that ain't it...no hate

You gotta get ya flow right. You need to learn ya 4 counts in a beat. 4 counts is bar. You kinda want ya lines to be in that 4 count and end around the end of each 4 count. Use the metronome on bandlab or YouTube it.💯

thanks for tip man

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i made this beat pretty quickly like 20 minutes its unmixed

Well that was an easy choice.  Sorry, but it's 100% true. 

Not much to say here. Other than keep working on ya structure, punches, flow. Try to do something simple and basic to start an biy on beat. And try to be more present prince. Rock got the w here