Cali: Some nice flowing lines here. Need to edit/fix your structure some. Keep at it man. Your concepts were decent, need little more work executing said concepts. guts: Your piece didn't flow as well as Cali's, little choppy in areas/stretched. Punches/Conceptes were executed better than opponents here though. Props, keep at it. Fairs in getns. Thanks for the read. 

CaliLuv: Your parvo and tik tok lines were alright, but in the rest it seems like you were focused on trying to have a double or triple rhyme scheme and just added words because they worked with it. Example - the ladder is capped like the federal wage.. what ladder? And what's that have to do with battling? In other lines the wording seemed off to me so I didn't connect with it. Like, matter this fact sounds awkward. Far from fearing also sounded weird.. far from feared would make more sense but wouldn't rhyme with your Van Gogh line. Rhymewise you're on the right track, just gotta make sure everything is smooth and makes sense.

guts: Your rhyming was overall better and you threw in some decent disses.. your ender was definitely the best part of your verse. Only thing I'd change is laughed out loud to laughed aloud or something like that so it speaks the same way the other three multis do.. with laughed OUT loud, you kinda need that OUT sound with the other three to make them sound the same, and the other three have kind of a silent second syllable with only the first and third syllables emphasized to it sounded weird to me when I read it.

Bodied him easily....dude had zero punches against all punches ..

i would ask a mod to remove your obvious hate vote, but i'm pretty certain you have 0 vp. which is what happens when somebodies a known asshat sitewide. 

Guess I don't see how his punches are better. 

Cali this is alot better set up than your previous battles, you picked up rather quickly. You had good multis My suggestion is swing a little harder with your punchlines, other than that you seem to be adjusting well. Fairs in. 

Nirt- can you elaborate what he did better than me.

Appreciate it

His punchlines were clearer easier to follow, set up cleaner. Your best punch was the tik tok meme it flowed well and connected nicely. If work on your set ups and wording. Don't get frustrated it took me a while to get it, still working on it. I think you're gonna be dope. Keep it simple not too simple but clearer.

Guts didn't have the greatest verse by any means but it was clean enough to edge the dub.

I also like what u did with your closer don't see that too often so if you could incorporate that with a more aggressive bar it would definitely work in your favor.

Appreciate the explanation. I'm not mad just trying to understand how this site judges battle verses besides the outlined, multis/ punches/personals/wordplay/ etc. It can be tough to hear the flow over text but I ain't got no mic. some said I didn't have enough Multi's now it seems multi's unless at end of line is frowned upon..

Good look on the comment!

i think you had a better drop than i was expecting, so i went light, which isn't an insult, i actually like to see rookies with potential. for your verse though, some of your wording and execution was off, otherwise i do think you threw more punches than i did. for example

'call me the tax man,  cause i will cut this garbo' 

calling someone a garbo to fit the rhyme scheme isn't clean. something or someone can BE garbo but you wouldn't say im gonna talk to garbo, or garbo and i are going to dinner... 

and then another matter is the parbo bar, which isn't bad but you gotta understand i've been here a bit and everybody has used that line against me, so when people read it, it's just old news, which isn't your fault, but when you're doing name plays you can't go for the obvious one. 

anways gg man, i think you got potential and if you ever need help just hit me up

GG to you too man..  other people have used the parvo like a dog disease line on you? Here I thought I was being original.. that's a bummer..  still getting a feel for this site.. I will keep grinding.. yeah I was going for Cut like tax cuts then the parvo line took over so went with Garbo... No hate thanks for the battle

Geek Squad!

Overall, I think guts had the advantage since he's more of a text battler whereas cali's been going outside of his comfort zone as a text battler. Both were good, it's just that i think guts did a bit better. Fv no h8

Appreciate the comments everyone!