Jay - Seems like you just rhymed shit together, had more of a cypher feel than a battle. Read up on the basics.

remarK - Dope seeing a battle from you. Obviously experience played a big part here. Your concepts weren't the greatest but the execution was good enough to even that out. 

winner wasted some good lines tbh.

fair is in.

Loser needs to maybe look at some hot battles and emmulate some basic principles 

jay had a few occurences of potentially decent and good imagery here and there along with set ups but was behind on multis, structure and effective punches coz probably it's still early days for him here which s why unlike his opponent who was flawless in his first three lines (the quality kinda dipped after that). That what cost jay the battle and made it easier for remark to win this one easy.

So this one was very one sided imo. Let's just say his verse never got Lost In Translation. 

one was way too badic and needs to put more effort in his verse the other did the opposite to get the w.

Good to see remarK back in the ring here. Definitely a one sided battle. Billie Eilish hair was nice. Fairs in

.one was better than the other...

"Pourin a pint"

giving thi s to remark. more creativity, rhyme complexity, and he insulted/attacked his opponent. Jay you rhyme well, just gotta work on punchlines and hard hitting stuff.