| |
06-09-2012, 04:43 PM
|
Join Date: Mar 2011
Posts: 1,257
Mentioned: 205 Post(s)
Tagged: 13 Thread(s)
Ranked Audio Record
19 Won / 13 Lost
Ranked Text Record
16 Won / 3 Lost
|
Word.
I've probly used wordplay that has been ABIT forced. like it might not sound perfect... But I never tried forcing 2 words together - Eg. Im sure I read a battle about a year ago, and some dude tried forcing somethin like "You'll get 'wet' up n 'change colour' like when the 'Rainbow/Rain blow' lol it was whack as shit.
|
|
06-09-2012, 04:43 PM
|
#21
|
|
Ranked Audio Record
19 Won / 13 Lost
Ranked Text Record
16 Won / 3 Lost
Join Date: Mar 2011
Voted:
0 audio / 39
text
Posts: 1,257
Mentioned: 205 Post(s)
Tagged: 13 Thread(s)
|
Word.
I've probly used wordplay that has been ABIT forced. like it might not sound perfect... But I never tried forcing 2 words together - Eg. Im sure I read a battle about a year ago, and some dude tried forcing somethin like "You'll get 'wet' up n 'change colour' like when the 'Rainbow/Rain blow' lol it was whack as shit.
|
|
Offline
|
|
06-09-2012, 07:53 PM
|
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 1,513
Mentioned: 505 Post(s)
Tagged: 25 Thread(s)
Ranked Text Record
54 Won / 9 Lost
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by Streetz-Da-Hood
i saw like 10 battles this wk with leaf/leave wordplay attempts... since when does that shit rhyme?.. seen some otha shit too.. deletes/the least juice/jukes.. all that close but not quite type shit
|
Does Jew/You Wordplay go in with that?
|
|
06-09-2012, 07:53 PM
|
#22
|
|
Ranked Text Record
54 Won / 9 Lost
Join Date: Aug 2011
Voted:
0 audio / 425
text
Posts: 1,513
Mentioned: 505 Post(s)
Tagged: 25 Thread(s)
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by Streetz-Da-Hood
i saw like 10 battles this wk with leaf/leave wordplay attempts... since when does that shit rhyme?.. seen some otha shit too.. deletes/the least juice/jukes.. all that close but not quite type shit
|
Does Jew/You Wordplay go in with that?
|
|
Offline
|
|
06-09-2012, 07:54 PM
|
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 5,305
Mentioned: 436 Post(s)
Tagged: 36 Thread(s)
Ranked Text Record
281 Won / 5 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
53 Won / 0 Lost
|
on a seperate note.... in the uk ... Jew rhymes perfectly with Due
__________________
.
Timeless ... so age don't count in the booth
When ya flow stay submerged in the fountain of youth - Rakim
Quote:
Originally Posted by Just €
Let me exPLAIN N DROP SOME KNOWLEDGE..Since uA's AN ALCOHOLIC!! you can SAY HE's PROPER SCOTTISH cuz he WAKES UP IN THE MORNINGS craving TASTES OF VODKA TONICS in his DAILY POT OF PORRIDGE laced with, BAILYS .... CHOCOLATE ORANGE? *shrugs*
|
Executive producer of sig quotes :UA
|
|
06-09-2012, 07:54 PM
|
#23
|
|
Ranked Text Record
281 Won / 5 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
53 Won / 0 Lost
Join Date: Apr 2007
Voted:
0 audio / 0 text
Posts: 5,305
Mentioned: 436 Post(s)
Tagged: 36 Thread(s)
|
on a seperate note.... in the uk ... Jew rhymes perfectly with Due
__________________
.
Timeless ... so age don't count in the booth
When ya flow stay submerged in the fountain of youth - Rakim
Quote:
Originally Posted by Just €
Let me exPLAIN N DROP SOME KNOWLEDGE..Since uA's AN ALCOHOLIC!! you can SAY HE's PROPER SCOTTISH cuz he WAKES UP IN THE MORNINGS craving TASTES OF VODKA TONICS in his DAILY POT OF PORRIDGE laced with, BAILYS .... CHOCOLATE ORANGE? *shrugs*
|
Executive producer of sig quotes :UA
|
|
Offline
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:06 PM
|
Posts: n/a
Mentioned: Post(s)
Tagged: Thread(s)
|
dust/duck.....
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:06 PM
|
#24
|
|
Guest
Voted:
0 audio / 0 text
Posts: n/a
Mentioned: Post(s)
Tagged: Thread(s)
|
dust/duck.....
|
|
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:15 PM
|
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 1,513
Mentioned: 505 Post(s)
Tagged: 25 Thread(s)
Ranked Text Record
54 Won / 9 Lost
|
Im just asking cause he used the jew/you wordplay against me.
@ UNKNOWN ARTIST
When are you gonna throw out a couple more battles again?
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:15 PM
|
#25
|
|
Ranked Text Record
54 Won / 9 Lost
Join Date: Aug 2011
Voted:
0 audio / 425
text
Posts: 1,513
Mentioned: 505 Post(s)
Tagged: 25 Thread(s)
|
Im just asking cause he used the jew/you wordplay against me.
@ UNKNOWN ARTIST
When are you gonna throw out a couple more battles again?
|
|
Offline
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:29 PM
|
Join Date: Feb 2009
Posts: 3,164
Mentioned: 337 Post(s)
Tagged: 17 Thread(s)
Ranked Text Record
86 Won / 7 Lost
|
Lol nice lil comeback attempt but u sayin that is just helpin me prove my point bc I hardly use wordplay which goes back to the first post where I said if u gotta force yaself to make words rhyme then take a break..n u see how spaced out my battles me.. So u really aint sayin nothin that I aint already say from the jump..smh
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:29 PM
|
#26
|
|
Basic Member
Ranked Text Record
86 Won / 7 Lost
Join Date: Feb 2009
Voted:
0 audio / 0 text
Posts: 3,164
Mentioned: 337 Post(s)
Tagged: 17 Thread(s)
|
Lol nice lil comeback attempt but u sayin that is just helpin me prove my point bc I hardly use wordplay which goes back to the first post where I said if u gotta force yaself to make words rhyme then take a break..n u see how spaced out my battles me.. So u really aint sayin nothin that I aint already say from the jump..smh
|
|
Offline
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:32 PM
|
Posts: n/a
Mentioned: Post(s)
Tagged: Thread(s)
|
shut up and send that 32.. straight up
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:32 PM
|
#27
|
|
Guest
Voted:
0 audio / 0 text
Posts: n/a
Mentioned: Post(s)
Tagged: Thread(s)
|
shut up and send that 32.. straight up
|
|
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:45 PM
|
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 1,513
Mentioned: 505 Post(s)
Tagged: 25 Thread(s)
Ranked Text Record
54 Won / 9 Lost
|
No I'm just saying your criticizing others and doing the same shit.
|
|
06-09-2012, 08:45 PM
|
#28
|
|
Ranked Text Record
54 Won / 9 Lost
Join Date: Aug 2011
Voted:
0 audio / 425
text
Posts: 1,513
Mentioned: 505 Post(s)
Tagged: 25 Thread(s)
|
No I'm just saying your criticizing others and doing the same shit.
|
|
Offline
|
|
06-09-2012, 09:05 PM
|
Posts: n/a
Mentioned: Post(s)
Tagged: Thread(s)
|
Wordplay has NOTHING to do with changing a words pronunciation to make it rhyme... if anything, you change the pronunciation to make it sound like another word to have a double meaning.
The problem I have is when someone uses wordplay but the play on words has absolutely nothing to do with the line at all... that is forced.
What you are saying is really you don't fuck with wordplay, which to me says, you don't listen well enough and don't read well enough to get what most of the head ppl on here are puttin down..
---------- Post added at 07:05 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:52 PM ----------
Let me give you a case and point... Last Audio battle v. Soup he said...
'Throwin hooks'? mean he 'castin a line', so what you PLAN TO WRITE, don't ASK HIM TWICE, coz we all know your 'Reel In Tension' is to CATCH A BITE!
Now we get he is using the Real Intention/ Reel In Tension but that makes a very poor attempt at relating to the overall meaningfulness of the line...
Now we tweak it a little:
'Throwin hooks'? mean he 'castin a line', so what you PLANIN TO WRITE, Im not ASKIN HIM TWICE, coz we all know your 'Reelin Tension' is heavy but you'll never SNAP ON A LINE.
Not a perfect line because the set up can use work but the wordplay is fixed to actually work with the punch not just be bullshit inserted in there to half way connect in some lazy manner.
|
|
06-09-2012, 09:05 PM
|
#29
|
|
Guest
Voted:
0 audio / 0 text
Posts: n/a
Mentioned: Post(s)
Tagged: Thread(s)
|
Wordplay has NOTHING to do with changing a words pronunciation to make it rhyme... if anything, you change the pronunciation to make it sound like another word to have a double meaning.
The problem I have is when someone uses wordplay but the play on words has absolutely nothing to do with the line at all... that is forced.
What you are saying is really you don't fuck with wordplay, which to me says, you don't listen well enough and don't read well enough to get what most of the head ppl on here are puttin down..
---------- Post added at 07:05 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:52 PM ----------
Let me give you a case and point... Last Audio battle v. Soup he said...
'Throwin hooks'? mean he 'castin a line', so what you PLAN TO WRITE, don't ASK HIM TWICE, coz we all know your 'Reel In Tension' is to CATCH A BITE!
Now we get he is using the Real Intention/ Reel In Tension but that makes a very poor attempt at relating to the overall meaningfulness of the line...
Now we tweak it a little:
'Throwin hooks'? mean he 'castin a line', so what you PLANIN TO WRITE, Im not ASKIN HIM TWICE, coz we all know your 'Reelin Tension' is heavy but you'll never SNAP ON A LINE.
Not a perfect line because the set up can use work but the wordplay is fixed to actually work with the punch not just be bullshit inserted in there to half way connect in some lazy manner.
|
|
|
|
06-09-2012, 09:11 PM
|
Join Date: Jan 2009
Posts: 12,697
Mentioned: 616 Post(s)
Tagged: 41 Thread(s)
Ranked Audio Record
62 Won / 1 Lost
Ranked Text Record
75 Won / 24 Lost
|
You want a true example of forced WP?
Here.
He'll get 'SERVED WITH A SMILE...' And when the money's up? He's not "Apparent With Cash" just because this 'PERSON A CHILD!!'(A Parent/Purse N A Child.)
THAT. makes absolutely no sense and is the true definition of forcing a concept.
Read through it a couple of times and just think about it.
1 more time
He's not..... "Apparent With Cash".... just because this.... 'PERSON A CHILD!!'......
Thats like SUPER forced
|
|
06-09-2012, 09:11 PM
|
#30
|
|
Ranked Audio Record
62 Won / 1 Lost
Ranked Text Record
75 Won / 24 Lost
Join Date: Jan 2009
Voted:
0 audio / 0 text
Posts: 12,697
Mentioned: 616 Post(s)
Tagged: 41 Thread(s)
|
You want a true example of forced WP?
Here.
He'll get 'SERVED WITH A SMILE...' And when the money's up? He's not "Apparent With Cash" just because this 'PERSON A CHILD!!'(A Parent/Purse N A Child.)
THAT. makes absolutely no sense and is the true definition of forcing a concept.
Read through it a couple of times and just think about it.
1 more time
He's not..... "Apparent With Cash".... just because this.... 'PERSON A CHILD!!'......
Thats like SUPER forced
|
|
Offline
|
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:01 AM.
|
|
|
Battle Feed
Linear Mode
