ATT 2018 ROUND 1: Writer 9 vs Writer 7 (Writer 9 wins 5-3)

MVGT: Writer 9. Writer 9 seemed to have stuck the topic more specifically here and was really keeping me entertained all the way through. The subtle touches throughout the piece that symbolized the metamorphosis were really cool and the fact they were able to intertwine that with the topic at hand was really good. All in all was very impressed with this read.

Writer 7 impressed me with the flow of their piece all the way through, however, I feel that they didn't really encompass the overall topic given as well as #9 did, to me. Almost seemed as if they didn't really stay on one particular train of thought at all and it kind of rambled, in a sense.

Good first read for sure, and good luck to both.

MVGT: Writer 9. Writer 9 seemed to have stuck the topic more specifically here and was really keeping me entertained all the way through. The subtle touches throughout the piece that symbolized the metamorphosis were really cool and the fact they were able to intertwine that with the topic at hand was really good. All in all was very impressed with this read.

Writer 7 impressed me with the flow of their piece all the way through, however, I feel that they didn't really encompass the overall topic given as well as #9 did, to me. Almost seemed as if they didn't really stay on one particular train of thought at all and it kind of rambled, in a sense.

Good first read for sure, and good luck to both.

[NOBLE]

First of all, writer 7 went over the line limit, which was 20-30 lines. Both took different approaches and made different interpretations of the topic. Writer 9 seemed to identify the person in the image as a teacher addressing the butterflies, which are his students, and giving them advice. Writer 7 seemed to interpret the butterflies as "butterflies in your stomach" or a feeling of love or a crush one might have for a classmate. I enjoyed the flow and cadence from both, but I think writer 9's was a little more structured. Both used imagery well and conveyed emotion. I think writer 7 might have conveyed more emotion, but again he went over the line limit and was thus able to get more into the story. Nice read fellas.
MVGT: Writer 9

[NOBLE]

First of all, writer 7 went over the line limit, which was 20-30 lines. Both took different approaches and made different interpretations of the topic. Writer 9 seemed to identify the person in the image as a teacher addressing the butterflies, which are his students, and giving them advice. Writer 7 seemed to interpret the butterflies as "butterflies in your stomach" or a feeling of love or a crush one might have for a classmate. I enjoyed the flow and cadence from both, but I think writer 9's was a little more structured. Both used imagery well and conveyed emotion. I think writer 7 might have conveyed more emotion, but again he went over the line limit and was thus able to get more into the story. Nice read fellas.
MVGT: Writer 9

[NOBLE]

Writer 9 wins and will move on to the next round. Writer 7's identity will be revealed when the round closes.

[NOBLE]

Writer 9 wins and will move on to the next round. Writer 7's identity will be revealed when the round closes.