WTC: Week 2 - Page 2 - Lets Beef

**Black Book** · #11 03-03-2013, 11:31 AM

Probably you...

**Black Book** · 03-03-2013, 11:31 AM

Probably you...

#12 03-03-2013, 01:55 PM

It was supposed to be metaphorical. It was supposed to start off with his life soaring high, and then come crashing down. But then I kinda lost my way lol. I typed it up right after I got off work and was half asleep. But yea, the intent was for it to be a metaphorical approach rather than a straight up one.

03-03-2013, 01:55 PM

It was supposed to be metaphorical. It was supposed to start off with his life soaring high, and then come crashing down. But then I kinda lost my way lol. I typed it up right after I got off work and was half asleep. But yea, the intent was for it to be a metaphorical approach rather than a straight up one.

Barack Obamaa · #13 03-04-2013, 02:48 AM

It wasn't THAT bad but it was bad? lol

Barack Obamaa · 03-04-2013, 02:48 AM

It wasn't THAT bad but it was bad? lol

**Black Book** · #14 03-04-2013, 06:53 PM

@John John-, I never said it was bad? I said the wording and execution didn't serve the idea/approach justice. They held you back from the potential your piece had.

**Black Book** · 03-04-2013, 06:53 PM

@John John-, I never said it was bad? I said the wording and execution didn't serve the idea/approach justice. They held you back from the potential your piece had.


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