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this verse literally has EVERYTHING!
Goblins, "Sunamiz", Russians, Priests, The Alphabet, Zombies, Illuminati, New World Order, Planets, Nuclear Warfare, "Aspestes"
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05-12-2012, 08:25 PM
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this verse literally has EVERYTHING!
Goblins, "Sunamiz", Russians, Priests, The Alphabet, Zombies, Illuminati, New World Order, Planets, Nuclear Warfare, "Aspestes"
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05-12-2012, 09:11 PM
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05-12-2012, 09:11 PM
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05-12-2012, 09:18 PM
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damn Pulse your sister is pretty
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05-12-2012, 09:18 PM
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damn Pulse your sister is pretty
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05-12-2012, 09:38 PM
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this verse literally has EVERYTHING!
Goblins, "Sunamiz", Russians, Priests, The Alphabet, Zombies, Illuminati, New World Order, Planets, Nuclear Warfare, "Aspestes"

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That's because he's, and I quote, "not just your typical rappa"
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this verse literally has EVERYTHING!
Goblins, "Sunamiz", Russians, Priests, The Alphabet, Zombies, Illuminati, New World Order, Planets, Nuclear Warfare, "Aspestes"

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That's because he's, and I quote, "not just your typical rappa"
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05-12-2012, 09:47 PM
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"It takes one second to change like you blink"
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"It takes one second to change like you blink"
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05-13-2012, 02:40 AM
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damn Pulse your sister is pretty
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I'm not like you in the sense that a long line of rednecks doesnt precede me B
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05-13-2012, 02:40 AM
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I'm not like you in the sense that a long line of rednecks doesnt precede me B
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07-05-2012, 10:09 PM
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wow... either or.. ima post this track regardless what you pussies think.
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07-05-2012, 10:09 PM
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wow... either or.. ima post this track regardless what you pussies think.
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PEOPLE ARE SUCH CUNTS LOL imo the 1st bar was nice , if you kept the structure and rhyme scheme based like that you would have a more solid foundation to progress from , instead of a random sentence rhymed by the endin words , just keep writing and taking peoples negative criticism to make your writing better....keep at it and keep elevating
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PEOPLE ARE SUCH CUNTS LOL imo the 1st bar was nice , if you kept the structure and rhyme scheme based like that you would have a more solid foundation to progress from , instead of a random sentence rhymed by the endin words , just keep writing and taking peoples negative criticism to make your writing better....keep at it and keep elevating
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07-06-2012, 06:38 AM
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@ WHITZ
Had a lot of deep thought to it. Appreciate the effort it took to write this. I would clean this up a little and drop this in a 64 cypher or something.
Don't mind the asshat comments. Some people act like their shit doesn't stink. Keep doing your thing.
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@ WHITZ
Had a lot of deep thought to it. Appreciate the effort it took to write this. I would clean this up a little and drop this in a 64 cypher or something.
Don't mind the asshat comments. Some people act like their shit doesn't stink. Keep doing your thing.
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hear it live thru the wire
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07-06-2012, 06:10 PM
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