In Depth Verse Breakdown

Originally Posted by EtH

What was that battle even in? I lost to you and Seul when tagging with Punk and I beat Cel and someone when tagging with you. I have no idea when this was. I actually thought it was the one we won before realising it was you in the battle

It was the 16 we had from RULE’s December THC.

Originally Posted by EtH

What was that battle even in? I lost to you and Seul when tagging with Punk and I beat Cel and someone when tagging with you. I have no idea when this was. I actually thought it was the one we won before realising it was you in the battle

It was the 16 we had from RULE’s December THC.

[EtH]

Originally Posted by Rieper

It was the 16 we had from RULE’s December THC.

Oh, why the fuck you writing in such distinctively 2 styles? Was proper tag versey haha.

Just saying, my original 16 was better

Edit: Dunno how I took you to 22% though. I know non-compliments battle was an original idea but that shits fucking impossible to nail haha. The snarky sarcasm bars work with plenty of padding with different kinds of bars, but reading that verse back it just doesn't have any sizzle.

Edit 2: Wait why the fuck are you using the reference style? ACs lessons 1-98 was "Don't use the reference style", 99 was "Don't use Grizz wordplay" and 100 was back to the previous one.

[EtH]

Originally Posted by Rieper

It was the 16 we had from RULE’s December THC.

Oh, why the fuck you writing in such distinctively 2 styles? Was proper tag versey haha.

Just saying, my original 16 was better

Edit: Dunno how I took you to 22% though. I know non-compliments battle was an original idea but that shits fucking impossible to nail haha. The snarky sarcasm bars work with plenty of padding with different kinds of bars, but reading that verse back it just doesn't have any sizzle.

Edit 2: Wait why the fuck are you using the reference style? ACs lessons 1-98 was "Don't use the reference style", 99 was "Don't use Grizz wordplay" and 100 was back to the previous one.

[Rain Matrix 2021]

"i cant be bothered voting on your wack-ass lyrics"

Eth tryina be the bad guy now instead of the victim lol ... thats pretty cool man. Shows insecurity actually ... ... In every possible way


Why can't u open up nigga? think its soft? lol .... Congrats your the 1 person above emotions. If anything , that doesn't make u smart ... Studies suggest lack of emotions come from low intelligence ... ie insects. It's a smart person thing ... S'why rainy got a bigger heart, and a higher IQ


Ur words are pretty tough looking tho atleast the old Rebel-with-a-tragic-past-so-he-has-trouble-opening-up gimmick looks nice on ya

[Rain Matrix 2021]

"i cant be bothered voting on your wack-ass lyrics"

Eth tryina be the bad guy now instead of the victim lol ... thats pretty cool man. Shows insecurity actually ... ... In every possible way


Why can't u open up nigga? think its soft? lol .... Congrats your the 1 person above emotions. If anything , that doesn't make u smart ... Studies suggest lack of emotions come from low intelligence ... ie insects. It's a smart person thing ... S'why rainy got a bigger heart, and a higher IQ


Ur words are pretty tough looking tho atleast the old Rebel-with-a-tragic-past-so-he-has-trouble-opening-up gimmick looks nice on ya

[Rain Matrix 2021]

Oh yea i forgot .. im blocked Lol


Still looking tough buddy. Not insecure At Alllll

---------- Post added at 09:20 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:18 PM ----------

Fuck Ill Block Myself If It'll Make u Feel Better Hahah


EtH Ignoring Me Is Ignoring The Laws of The Universe ... It's not really a spite thing


Am i trying to help u? Or am i continuing just so u dont listen, ruining your life

Who knows Who cares Ur Thick Headed . "Rainy climbed that mountain so im not going to" .. Childish

[Rain Matrix 2021]

Oh yea i forgot .. im blocked Lol


Still looking tough buddy. Not insecure At Alllll

---------- Post added at 09:20 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:18 PM ----------

Fuck Ill Block Myself If It'll Make u Feel Better Hahah


EtH Ignoring Me Is Ignoring The Laws of The Universe ... It's not really a spite thing


Am i trying to help u? Or am i continuing just so u dont listen, ruining your life

Who knows Who cares Ur Thick Headed . "Rainy climbed that mountain so im not going to" .. Childish

[Rowdy]

Originally Posted by Rain Matrix 2021

Oh yea i forgot .. im blocked Lol


Still looking tough buddy. Not insecure At Alllll

---------- Post added at 09:20 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:18 PM ----------

Fuck Ill Block Myself If It'll Make u Feel Better Hahah


EtH Ignoring Me Is Ignoring The Laws of The Universe ... It's not really a spite thing


Am i trying to help u? Or am i continuing just so u dont listen, ruining your life

Who knows Who cares Ur Thick Headed . "Rainy climbed that mountain so im not going to" .. Childish

He legit has you blocked yet you're still typing to him knowing he's not reading it.

let it go b.

[Rowdy]

Originally Posted by Rain Matrix 2021

Oh yea i forgot .. im blocked Lol


Still looking tough buddy. Not insecure At Alllll

---------- Post added at 09:20 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:18 PM ----------

Fuck Ill Block Myself If It'll Make u Feel Better Hahah


EtH Ignoring Me Is Ignoring The Laws of The Universe ... It's not really a spite thing


Am i trying to help u? Or am i continuing just so u dont listen, ruining your life

Who knows Who cares Ur Thick Headed . "Rainy climbed that mountain so im not going to" .. Childish

He legit has you blocked yet you're still typing to him knowing he's not reading it.

let it go b.

[Shodan]

He'd ruin-his-whole-life by choosing-to-throw-dice, tossing CUBES AND CHANCING IT! He's currently "on top of the house" but the FUTURE'S CANCEROUS for that STUPID GAMBLING SHIT you wouldn't see "six-sided objects get 'em more turned around" unless I USED AN ALLEN WRENCH to SCREW A RAFTER IN!!! I'll beat you like a slave on some KUNTA'S MASTER SHIT, you can get "whipped around on the shoulder" without a CRUISING AMBULANCE! - and with this public curbstomp "I'll get more fame for stepping on that body" than the LUNAR LANDING DID!!! If someone didn't surrender on my terms my missiles probly BLEW THE MAN TO BITS! He knows "Negotiating conditions will lead to a strike being called" like a UNION PLANNED TO QUIT!!! This dumb-fucker begs gun-runners to give him RUGERS, GATS, & SMITHS because he thinks it puts him in the COOLEST CLASS TO SPIT! This white boy's got more "hand-outs to raise arms for sport" than a saLUTING CLASS OF KIDS in MUNICH AT THE GYM if the FUHRER'S BACK AGAIN!!! He begged me for a spot in Fire Nation, but the deLUSION THAT YOU'D GET into my CREW IS STAGERRING, which had this "kid getting left in a different group," it's like you MOVED FROM "MAGA, BITCH!" to a YOUTH-FOR-SANDERS GIG!!! / The Fire Nation.

[Shodan]

He'd ruin-his-whole-life by choosing-to-throw-dice, tossing CUBES AND CHANCING IT! He's currently "on top of the house" but the FUTURE'S CANCEROUS for that STUPID GAMBLING SHIT you wouldn't see "six-sided objects get 'em more turned around" unless I USED AN ALLEN WRENCH to SCREW A RAFTER IN!!! I'll beat you like a slave on some KUNTA'S MASTER SHIT, you can get "whipped around on the shoulder" without a CRUISING AMBULANCE! - and with this public curbstomp "I'll get more fame for stepping on that body" than the LUNAR LANDING DID!!! If someone didn't surrender on my terms my missiles probly BLEW THE MAN TO BITS! He knows "Negotiating conditions will lead to a strike being called" like a UNION PLANNED TO QUIT!!! This dumb-fucker begs gun-runners to give him RUGERS, GATS, & SMITHS because he thinks it puts him in the COOLEST CLASS TO SPIT! This white boy's got more "hand-outs to raise arms for sport" than a saLUTING CLASS OF KIDS in MUNICH AT THE GYM if the FUHRER'S BACK AGAIN!!! He begged me for a spot in Fire Nation, but the deLUSION THAT YOU'D GET into my CREW IS STAGERRING, which had this "kid getting left in a different group," it's like you MOVED FROM "MAGA, BITCH!" to a YOUTH-FOR-SANDERS GIG!!! / The Fire Nation.

[Rain Matrix 2021]

@punk idgaf i was learning about it as i wrote about it. Wasnt out of the way at all ... And everytime i post, EtH gets to feel like he's ignoring me lol Dudes confidence is high af right now. Not a bad thing is it?


+ You & Him Still Incorporating My Idea's Into Your Posts Lol .... That was just low-level shit you guys could maybe comprehend The last few weeks. Hope it makes you feel smart. Got a Journal Started , Putting some ideas down on paper. a Black-Hole Theory, Shit Like That


Gooood luck with the whole "Fix-LB" Project lol

[Rain Matrix 2021]

@punk idgaf i was learning about it as i wrote about it. Wasnt out of the way at all ... And everytime i post, EtH gets to feel like he's ignoring me lol Dudes confidence is high af right now. Not a bad thing is it?


+ You & Him Still Incorporating My Idea's Into Your Posts Lol .... That was just low-level shit you guys could maybe comprehend The last few weeks. Hope it makes you feel smart. Got a Journal Started , Putting some ideas down on paper. a Black-Hole Theory, Shit Like That


Gooood luck with the whole "Fix-LB" Project lol

[Kiwi Peewee]

@EtH I can't ask for public feedback on my verse for a battle that's still open; BUT... surely since this battle is an 8-liner you could drop a quick vote, since the whole battle is no longer than the Rieper verse you just broke down... https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=517828

[Kiwi Peewee]

@EtH I can't ask for public feedback on my verse for a battle that's still open; BUT... surely since this battle is an 8-liner you could drop a quick vote, since the whole battle is no longer than the Rieper verse you just broke down... https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=517828

[Barzooka]

https://www.letsbeef.com/tournament_...923&section=lb

When I kick your ass B? Boom! Lights out mother fucker! I just hit the SWITCH ON YOU! Your titles ain't shit to me! And in this battle I'll have "no ties to defeat" like SLIP ON SHOES!

You never had a BITCH ON YOU so you tend to BITCH ON DUDE! But yo! I HEARD THAT BAD SEX TRAITS had been your thing, nerd, FOR THE PAST DECADE! 'Cuz whenever you're playing with chess (chest) it's when the BOARD IS FLAT, CHECKMATE!

LET'S SAY, you thought you'd be in clear water. WOW MY DUDE! Your flow is fucking garbage! You wanna KNOW HOW I KNEW? Shit's like Cali, a bunch of trash keeps COMIN' OUT THE BLUE (BLEU)!!!

Listen you lil "Chicken CORDON BLEU", YOU such a ham 'n' everything you SPIT IS CHEEZY! But aCCORDIN' TO YOU, "it must be bad to eat soul food" 'cuz he made you DIP N LEAVE B!

Bleu ditched LB twice when "shit got hairy" we all know this DUDE'S SNATCH IS HOT 'N' BUSHY!!! So if anything coming "clean out his lips" it's just when there's a DOUCHBAG TO WASH HIS PUSSY!!!

You think YOU'D BE the dog talkin' that street shit like BLEU TUCKING FORTY FIVES? BRO YOU'RE SO SAD!!! Quit "capping," the "shots" show you're pussy when YOU FUCKING DOGGY STY, THAT'S PORNO MAGS!!! [1]

Big facts, "set you ablaze" and once you were burned out, we'd go IN DA COUCH TO SLEEP!!! Left us snoring, the only thing he's dope at, figures that his name was INDICA, BLEU REAKED!!! [2]

You CHOKE, NO PERSISTENCE, can't take the heat, lackin' fire man (lackin' fireman) you SCOPE FROM A DISTANCE!!! Calling himself Bleu, he tries sniping at the redzone, but like Australia, he got SMOKED IN AN INSTANT!!!

You a "washed up irrelevant joke" at least that's WHAT YOUR HO SAYS!!! So I'm "taking you outta the scene" like when they CUT GEORGE LOPEZ!!! [3]

Yo bread is mine when I'm "coming up from behind" but I let my NINE HIT THIS FOO FIRST!!!! Watch it "pressin' his chest when I got arms around 'em" like the HEIMLECH MANEUVER!!!! [4]

My flow was super fucking choppy because I felt super forced to rush this verse just like my first tournament battle with Bleu. However, according to the reviews if my delivery was just a bit better then I would have beaten Bleu, one of the most title decorated LB members of all time.

[1]. For the foreigners who are unfamiliar with firearms, forty-fives translates to firearms chambered in .45 caliber ammunition (e.g. a Kriss Vector.) Sty is short for style.

[2]. Indica is a strand of weed (not to be confused with strain) responsible for putting people to sleep opposed from the Sativa strand of weed which makes people more energetic. Bleu's name was Indica before he called himself Bleu/Noir.

[3]. George Lopez is a comedian who use to have his own television show named after himself. It was later cancelled.

[4]. A nine refers to another firearm chambered in 9mm Parabellum (e.g. a Glock 26 Gen. 5 or a Beretta 92x) and the Heimlech Maneuver is that thing they teach you in school where you get behind someone to apply pressure to their abdomen in case they're choking on food.

[Barzooka]

https://www.letsbeef.com/tournament_...923&section=lb

When I kick your ass B? Boom! Lights out mother fucker! I just hit the SWITCH ON YOU! Your titles ain't shit to me! And in this battle I'll have "no ties to defeat" like SLIP ON SHOES!

You never had a BITCH ON YOU so you tend to BITCH ON DUDE! But yo! I HEARD THAT BAD SEX TRAITS had been your thing, nerd, FOR THE PAST DECADE! 'Cuz whenever you're playing with chess (chest) it's when the BOARD IS FLAT, CHECKMATE!

LET'S SAY, you thought you'd be in clear water. WOW MY DUDE! Your flow is fucking garbage! You wanna KNOW HOW I KNEW? Shit's like Cali, a bunch of trash keeps COMIN' OUT THE BLUE (BLEU)!!!

Listen you lil "Chicken CORDON BLEU", YOU such a ham 'n' everything you SPIT IS CHEEZY! But aCCORDIN' TO YOU, "it must be bad to eat soul food" 'cuz he made you DIP N LEAVE B!

Bleu ditched LB twice when "shit got hairy" we all know this DUDE'S SNATCH IS HOT 'N' BUSHY!!! So if anything coming "clean out his lips" it's just when there's a DOUCHBAG TO WASH HIS PUSSY!!!

You think YOU'D BE the dog talkin' that street shit like BLEU TUCKING FORTY FIVES? BRO YOU'RE SO SAD!!! Quit "capping," the "shots" show you're pussy when YOU FUCKING DOGGY STY, THAT'S PORNO MAGS!!! [1]

Big facts, "set you ablaze" and once you were burned out, we'd go IN DA COUCH TO SLEEP!!! Left us snoring, the only thing he's dope at, figures that his name was INDICA, BLEU REAKED!!! [2]

You CHOKE, NO PERSISTENCE, can't take the heat, lackin' fire man (lackin' fireman) you SCOPE FROM A DISTANCE!!! Calling himself Bleu, he tries sniping at the redzone, but like Australia, he got SMOKED IN AN INSTANT!!!

You a "washed up irrelevant joke" at least that's WHAT YOUR HO SAYS!!! So I'm "taking you outta the scene" like when they CUT GEORGE LOPEZ!!! [3]

Yo bread is mine when I'm "coming up from behind" but I let my NINE HIT THIS FOO FIRST!!!! Watch it "pressin' his chest when I got arms around 'em" like the HEIMLECH MANEUVER!!!! [4]

My flow was super fucking choppy because I felt super forced to rush this verse just like my first tournament battle with Bleu. However, according to the reviews if my delivery was just a bit better then I would have beaten Bleu, one of the most title decorated LB members of all time.

[1]. For the foreigners who are unfamiliar with firearms, forty-fives translates to firearms chambered in .45 caliber ammunition (e.g. a Kriss Vector.) Sty is short for style.

[2]. Indica is a strand of weed (not to be confused with strain) responsible for putting people to sleep opposed from the Sativa strand of weed which makes people more energetic. Bleu's name was Indica before he called himself Bleu/Noir.

[3]. George Lopez is a comedian who use to have his own television show named after himself. It was later cancelled.

[4]. A nine refers to another firearm chambered in 9mm Parabellum (e.g. a Glock 26 Gen. 5 or a Beretta 92x) and the Heimlech Maneuver is that thing they teach you in school where you get behind someone to apply pressure to their abdomen in case they're choking on food.

[The Saaxxx Baba]

how deep is it gonna be?

[The Saaxxx Baba]

how deep is it gonna be?