punchlines vs multis

[Saxx]

Originally Posted by Dissizit

Don't be talking 'bogeys' this time cos if you think your SHITS HOT I hate to inform you- but IT'SNOT!

You ain't ill when you SPIT you lack punchlines and WIT! Ima help you out dog spell SPIT backwards cos it'll give you some TIPS!

you've lost this BET your more outdated than a black and white TV SET!

I'll take this little fat dwarf out cos he's one of the SEVEN ima use an mac TEN and take him to HEAVEN!

^^^^ Tbh you should expect to lose with lines like that, you lack clever ideas, good wording and strong punches all the battles you lost to is not due to multi's is due to them being better verses even though they we're "rubbish" as you call them each verse was much better than yours .. You should work on actually finding out how to make a solid punch . I believe there is a thread @Dono made ( If you can Dono post ya thread here so He can read it and elevate) , Hope nothing I said was taken out of context just tryna help you get better .

The bogeys punchline was epic! How could you not like that????
To be honest it I had the equipment my strenghths would be in audio as I can come up with rhymes off the top of my head. I lack the patience for writing I think.

Thanks for advice!

[Saxx]

Originally Posted by Dissizit

Don't be talking 'bogeys' this time cos if you think your SHITS HOT I hate to inform you- but IT'SNOT!

You ain't ill when you SPIT you lack punchlines and WIT! Ima help you out dog spell SPIT backwards cos it'll give you some TIPS!

you've lost this BET your more outdated than a black and white TV SET!

I'll take this little fat dwarf out cos he's one of the SEVEN ima use an mac TEN and take him to HEAVEN!

^^^^ Tbh you should expect to lose with lines like that, you lack clever ideas, good wording and strong punches all the battles you lost to is not due to multi's is due to them being better verses even though they we're "rubbish" as you call them each verse was much better than yours .. You should work on actually finding out how to make a solid punch . I believe there is a thread @Dono made ( If you can Dono post ya thread here so He can read it and elevate) , Hope nothing I said was taken out of context just tryna help you get better .

The bogeys punchline was epic! How could you not like that????
To be honest it I had the equipment my strenghths would be in audio as I can come up with rhymes off the top of my head. I lack the patience for writing I think.

Thanks for advice!

[Phracture]

Originally Posted by sax0joe

The bogeys punchline was epic! How could you not like that????
To be honest it I had the equipment my strenghths would be in audio as I can come up with rhymes off the top of my head. I lack the patience for writing I think.

Thanks for advice!

epic ? hell no lol
you gotta get more creative bruh .

[Phracture]

Originally Posted by sax0joe

The bogeys punchline was epic! How could you not like that????
To be honest it I had the equipment my strenghths would be in audio as I can come up with rhymes off the top of my head. I lack the patience for writing I think.

Thanks for advice!

epic ? hell no lol
you gotta get more creative bruh .