Help Me Improve? - Lets Beef

**Duh Great Whyte** · #1 04-13-2013, 10:47 PM

just up your multi schemes and add more umph to your punchlines, your build ups are ight got some decent concepts connection, but just get more complex ya dig, think out side the box, all i gotta say, other than that you on the right path bro, keep battlin and you'll elevate, need any more in depth explanation, pm my inbox w a verse n i can give u pointers and such

**Duh Great Whyte** · 04-13-2013, 10:47 PM

just up your multi schemes and add more umph to your punchlines, your build ups are ight got some decent concepts connection, but just get more complex ya dig, think out side the box, all i gotta say, other than that you on the right path bro, keep battlin and you'll elevate, need any more in depth explanation, pm my inbox w a verse n i can give u pointers and such


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