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I need some honest help
I dunno apparently i'm missing something in my battles, i don't see it but other people do, i just want some honest feedback how to improve my battles. p.s if you're gonna be a douche don't bother. 
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11-02-2010, 11:08 AM
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I need some honest help
I dunno apparently i'm missing something in my battles, i don't see it but other people do, i just want some honest feedback how to improve my battles. p.s if you're gonna be a douche don't bother.
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11-02-2010, 11:13 AM
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Drop a quick verse, I'll critique it for you to the best of my knowledge.
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11-02-2010, 11:13 AM
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Drop a quick verse, I'll critique it for you to the best of my knowledge.
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11-02-2010, 11:14 AM
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Damn nigga u been here since 07' u askin for help now??? SMH.
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11-02-2010, 11:14 AM
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Damn nigga u been here since 07' u askin for help now??? SMH.
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11-02-2010, 11:18 AM
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lol i only really came back to lb a couple in like september sort of. i din't touch it for ages before then. and siccness just peep my hotlist wit Kyle_
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11-02-2010, 11:18 AM
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lol i only really came back to lb a couple in like september sort of. i din't touch it for ages before then. and siccness just peep my hotlist wit Kyle_
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11-02-2010, 11:24 AM
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twist... ur shit is deep bro.. we've battled before
i think that u been around for so long that ur tryna fuse tha old shit n tha new swag.
jx let it go bro. kp ya trains of thought, jx try to strutucre it different, n also try to think of one or two HEAD TURNING punches to throw in there.
ur gud
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11-02-2010, 11:24 AM
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twist... ur shit is deep bro.. we've battled before
i think that u been around for so long that ur tryna fuse tha old shit n tha new swag.
jx let it go bro. kp ya trains of thought, jx try to strutucre it different, n also try to think of one or two HEAD TURNING punches to throw in there.
ur gud
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11-02-2010, 11:25 AM
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imo.......
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11-02-2010, 11:25 AM
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imo.......
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11-02-2010, 11:26 AM
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Well, I dont want to quote your verse, and break it down, might be considered as swaying so, holla at me when that battle closes, I'll tell you what I think you should do, moving forward.
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11-02-2010, 11:26 AM
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Well, I dont want to quote your verse, and break it down, might be considered as swaying so, holla at me when that battle closes, I'll tell you what I think you should do, moving forward.
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11-02-2010, 11:26 AM
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cheers famo, iunno i'm just doubtin it lately coz i been losing to even basic cats.
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11-02-2010, 11:26 AM
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cheers famo, iunno i'm just doubtin it lately coz i been losing to even basic cats.
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11-02-2010, 11:27 AM
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aight siccness cheers man.
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11-02-2010, 11:27 AM
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aight siccness cheers man.
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its closed
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