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you WHININ in YA LINES...think you "FLY"er wIT DA RHYMES?.. i'll get Ayvee-ate/Aviate like im a PILOT IN DA SKIES/Disguise(O_O!!!)..I spit dimes, you spit "DE-CENT" BARs..you GRIPPIN K'S NOW?..stop it. I'll VISIT "A-TOWN" and my knife tear his "V" NECK OFF!(
no offense but i dont get whats dope about that. That being your DOPEST bar...... and i do ... all the time wtf you talking about you started that. but heres my dissection of that bar.
You just tried to find shit that could mean two different words, without finding co-existing meanings to the different word phrases, in a clever way. See you said i'll get "ayvee-ate/aviate like im a pilot in da skies/disguise" ..... that creates two word phrases...
1. I'll get aviate like a pilot in the skies. Ok, cool, pretty cool name play.
2. I'll get ayvee ate like a pilot in disguise...... wtf? doesnt make any sense, so the bar ends up being stupid.
and the next part you did the alphabet emphasis concept, which is SOOOOO FUCKIN PLAYED unless you bring a dope concept, which i dont think you did....
So don't mind me asking, but all in all what is dope about that bar?
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you WHININ in YA LINES...think you "FLY"er wIT DA RHYMES?.. i'll get Ayvee-ate/Aviate like im a PILOT IN DA SKIES/Disguise(O_O!!!)..I spit dimes, you spit "DE-CENT" BARs..you GRIPPIN K'S NOW?..stop it. I'll VISIT "A-TOWN" and my knife tear his "V" NECK OFF!(
no offense but i dont get whats dope about that. That being your DOPEST bar...... and i do ... all the time wtf you talking about you started that. but heres my dissection of that bar.
You just tried to find shit that could mean two different words, without finding co-existing meanings to the different word phrases, in a clever way. See you said i'll get "ayvee-ate/aviate like im a pilot in da skies/disguise" ..... that creates two word phrases...
1. I'll get aviate like a pilot in the skies. Ok, cool, pretty cool name play.
2. I'll get ayvee ate like a pilot in disguise...... wtf? doesnt make any sense, so the bar ends up being stupid.
and the next part you did the alphabet emphasis concept, which is SOOOOO FUCKIN PLAYED unless you bring a dope concept, which i dont think you did....
So don't mind me asking, but all in all what is dope about that bar?
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01-06-2010, 12:42 AM
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Ask the people that voted. i never said i was a master of wordplay but they loved it. here's some other one that ppl liked.
expected bars but i aint HEARD ONE FA ME. i'm the best-emcee-to-hush-a-sound..i'll MURK SON FOR FREE! I'm da ruler, "get sent-a-meter/centimeter underground" before you "meaSURE UP TO ME". I'll "drop this vet" born a "rotten egg" you BIRD, SHUT YA BEAK. Think we're F.R.I.E.N.D.S..get "Hit With Mags" and end up "In The Cast"..thats how you WORK UP A SCENE!
i got a ton and im not the flawless battler, nobody is but it is what it is..ppl loved that shit... 
i was actually really feelin my first 16 line battle on this account too...
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=304600
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Ask the people that voted. i never said i was a master of wordplay but they loved it. here's some other one that ppl liked.
expected bars but i aint HEARD ONE FA ME. i'm the best-emcee-to-hush-a-sound..i'll MURK SON FOR FREE! I'm da ruler, "get sent-a-meter/centimeter underground" before you "meaSURE UP TO ME". I'll "drop this vet" born a "rotten egg" you BIRD, SHUT YA BEAK. Think we're F.R.I.E.N.D.S..get "Hit With Mags" and end up "In The Cast"..thats how you WORK UP A SCENE!
i got a ton and im not the flawless battler, nobody is but it is what it is..ppl loved that shit...
i was actually really feelin my first 16 line battle on this account too...
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=304600
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im not going to read it. you had one chance to show me a bar and thats how i will remember you
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im not going to read it. you had one chance to show me a bar and thats how i will remember you
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01-06-2010, 12:47 AM
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Okay. and if you're lucky enough you might have a chance to beat me. after all, thats all it is - chance. because with skill it aint hannin' brutha. 
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Okay. and if you're lucky enough you might have a chance to beat me. after all, thats all it is - chance. because with skill it aint hannin' brutha.
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Speaking of bars, am i still straight if I go streaking in a gay bar????
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Yes Yes Ya'll, an it don't stop....
Seems like me an' you bout had enough,
Cause man, it's tough to keep the fam in touch,
And to add it up, this rappin stuff got me flippin out like a blackjack bust
Don't give a fuck if you sound like Master P, Mobb Deep or Remy Martin,
Cuz even if the next to try us is the best of rhymers?
Still get bodied on plates like Jeffery Dahmer
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Speaking of bars, am i still straight if I go streaking in a gay bar????
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Yes Yes Ya'll, an it don't stop....
Seems like me an' you bout had enough,
Cause man, it's tough to keep the fam in touch,
And to add it up, this rappin stuff got me flippin out like a blackjack bust
Don't give a fuck if you sound like Master P, Mobb Deep or Remy Martin,
Cuz even if the next to try us is the best of rhymers?
Still get bodied on plates like Jeffery Dahmer
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pronto i like that bar. Got nice multies and multiple fresh schemes. good shit..... BITCH
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pronto i like that bar. Got nice multies and multiple fresh schemes. good shit..... BITCH
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Well then fuck you guys @ Pronto & Hugh. my best bar might've come in my most recent battle. and yes i know i used the "FLYer" w/ da rhymes but its different from the way I used it on AYVEE
pULSe vs Mayneak
so you POSIN A THREAT? on phoTOS w/ CHROME, TOAST, n THE LED? haha! DIS FRAUDs PIX ARE(Pixar) ... "OVER THE HEDGE!" I'll "lay you out" like CLOTHES on YA BED! i'm NICE FUCK'uh! with LINES i'M DIVINE, a 9th WONDER!..think you "FLYer" w/ RHYMES? - yea "WRIGHT" BROTHER!
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Well then fuck you guys @ Pronto & Hugh. my best bar might've come in my most recent battle. and yes i know i used the "FLYer" w/ da rhymes but its different from the way I used it on AYVEE
pULSe vs Mayneak
so you POSIN A THREAT? on phoTOS w/ CHROME, TOAST, n THE LED? haha! DIS FRAUDs PIX ARE(Pixar) ... "OVER THE HEDGE!" I'll "lay you out" like CLOTHES on YA BED! i'm NICE FUCK'uh! with LINES i'M DIVINE, a 9th WONDER!..think you "FLYer" w/ RHYMES? - yea "WRIGHT" BROTHER!
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Hahaha niggas are tryna roast pULSe today...smh..dont lemme catch anybody slippin in a thread Pronto cuz i'll flip that line on you pronto....YA GET IT?! LOL IM SMART... 
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Hahaha niggas are tryna roast pULSe today...smh..dont lemme catch anybody slippin in a thread Pronto cuz i'll flip that line on you pronto....YA GET IT?! LOL IM SMART...
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that was fucking dumb. i bet you would try to make that into a name play.
"im on a roll! call me butter! I'll kill pronto pronto! without no studder!"
I added the double negatives and misspellings for added accuracy.
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that was fucking dumb. i bet you would try to make that into a name play.
"im on a roll! call me butter! I'll kill pronto pronto! without no studder!"
I added the double negatives and misspellings for added accuracy.
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Really now? I would never try that. Who do you think I am, you? LOL plzz
If you post again you'll fuck up your 666 post count that im sure you cherish so much. i'ma go Missy PJ on ya'll MFD nikkuhs.
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Really now? I would never try that. Who do you think I am, you? LOL plzz
If you post again you'll fuck up your 666 post count that im sure you cherish so much. i'ma go Missy PJ on ya'll MFD nikkuhs.
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