LBTT March: Esso vs Far Out KawnceptZ - Lets Beef

**Shodan** · #1 03-30-2015, 03:38 AM

Far Out: Solid piece here - I felt the lyricism was lacking throughout, but the message was great. Adding in more multis and making it flow better, and doing some cleanups to the structure of it, would have helped immensely.

Esso: This wasn't quite what I had thought of upon seeing the image, but it works well all the same. Your lyricism throughout this piece was very impressive - some of the multi sets didn't match up perfectly, but they flowed well nonetheless. The structure behind it was good, and I enjoyed the message.

MVGT: Esso

**Shodan** · 03-30-2015, 03:38 AM

Far Out: Solid piece here - I felt the lyricism was lacking throughout, but the message was great. Adding in more multis and making it flow better, and doing some cleanups to the structure of it, would have helped immensely.

Esso: This wasn't quite what I had thought of upon seeing the image, but it works well all the same. Your lyricism throughout this piece was very impressive - some of the multi sets didn't match up perfectly, but they flowed well nonetheless. The structure behind it was good, and I enjoyed the message.

MVGT: Esso


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