Phroxen Vs ReeFer sucks

Originally Posted by Indianapolis Jones

When you said it was on Verity I assumed it was you since you 2 had a thing.

Either way the shits not good. Its horribly constructed. I can't read it naturally if the shit does its damdest to not allow me by being such a jumbled eyesore.

---------- Post added at 11:28 AM ---------- Previous post was at 11:25 AM ----------

Just to reinforce the point.

I speak english. When I read I expected the material to be grammatically correct and as a result flow naturally. Thats just how my brain functions. So if I'm seeing problems its not because I'm LOOKING for them. it's because they're blatantly there begging for my attention.

That shit reads like a retarded kid wrote it. It's an absolute mess.

I'm cool with shit being "ebonic'd up" and being a little less grammatically sound.

And my ducked verse against Verity was motherfucking flawless!

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=465098

Originally Posted by Indianapolis Jones

When you said it was on Verity I assumed it was you since you 2 had a thing.

Either way the shits not good. Its horribly constructed. I can't read it naturally if the shit does its damdest to not allow me by being such a jumbled eyesore.

---------- Post added at 11:28 AM ---------- Previous post was at 11:25 AM ----------

Just to reinforce the point.

I speak english. When I read I expected the material to be grammatically correct and as a result flow naturally. Thats just how my brain functions. So if I'm seeing problems its not because I'm LOOKING for them. it's because they're blatantly there begging for my attention.

That shit reads like a retarded kid wrote it. It's an absolute mess.

I'm cool with shit being "ebonic'd up" and being a little less grammatically sound.

And my ducked verse against Verity was motherfucking flawless!

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=465098