Phroxen Vs ReeFer sucks

Originally Posted by Row

i thought that the wp was so bad but i saw no one point it out.. so i kinda kept it to myself tbh. it looked like no one cared

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

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Originally Posted by Jason

lol yeah well i guess your accent will play a role in something like this
the setup and style is critical tho man .. Phroxen is amazing at writing in that style.. he writes it in such a way that the words bounce off each other properly
the way you did it in that bar is more .. rigid .. i dunno how to explain it .. its not the same quality of writing so its not gunna flow as well as his did

that said .. i wouldnt consider yours improper or criticize the verse for that multi .. but this type of writing is something he excels at so its even "less improper' when he does it .. it has nothing to do with his name .. Phroxen isnt even a big name (?) he kinda just appeared outta nowhere and dropped a few battles lol

your best multies in that bar are actually "praying together and racist endeavours" and they dont rhyme at all

So I don't rhyme at all....


Yet you haven't once mentioned PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD.


Maybe you will reply "I didn't read that" but that's EXACTLY what I'm talking about. Aye, it's easy to say "EtH man your shit's not rhyming" but in the first post of the thread there is a MUCH worse attempt at a rhyme from a top name on the site and no one seems to give a fuck.

Originally Posted by Row

i thought that the wp was so bad but i saw no one point it out.. so i kinda kept it to myself tbh. it looked like no one cared

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

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Originally Posted by Jason

lol yeah well i guess your accent will play a role in something like this
the setup and style is critical tho man .. Phroxen is amazing at writing in that style.. he writes it in such a way that the words bounce off each other properly
the way you did it in that bar is more .. rigid .. i dunno how to explain it .. its not the same quality of writing so its not gunna flow as well as his did

that said .. i wouldnt consider yours improper or criticize the verse for that multi .. but this type of writing is something he excels at so its even "less improper' when he does it .. it has nothing to do with his name .. Phroxen isnt even a big name (?) he kinda just appeared outta nowhere and dropped a few battles lol

your best multies in that bar are actually "praying together and racist endeavours" and they dont rhyme at all

So I don't rhyme at all....


Yet you haven't once mentioned PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD.


Maybe you will reply "I didn't read that" but that's EXACTLY what I'm talking about. Aye, it's easy to say "EtH man your shit's not rhyming" but in the first post of the thread there is a MUCH worse attempt at a rhyme from a top name on the site and no one seems to give a fuck.

Originally Posted by Corporate EtH

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

but mentioning that wouldnt have changed my vote.

and i dont follow crowds

Originally Posted by Corporate EtH

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

but mentioning that wouldnt have changed my vote.

and i dont follow crowds

PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD works fine.




This is pretty much like you're saying "EtH, Soulja Boi IS dope. You just have to hear his shit properly".

There is absolutely NO possible way in the English language, what so ever......AT ALL.....that PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD will ever...EVER....rhyme with each other.


The "LY" is a HUGE part of the GODLY FUED rhyme. It's by a landslide the most emphasised sound in those words. It's nowhere to be seen in PROBABLE.

PROBAH
GODLY

Not even similar in any aspect.

But it gets even worse.

FUED / BLE (Or BULL if you want to write it out like that)

FEUD and BULL.....WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?


Yeah absolutely miles past my comprehension here. If you can rhyme those two words, then Cabbage and Banana should be pretty damn similar as well.




EDIT: Beyond this, for the most part Phrox's verse rhymes fairly well. But in addition, it's ABSOLUTELY forced too. "MECCA STATUS; GODLY FEUD". That's ridiculously forced yet no one says it.

PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD works fine.




This is pretty much like you're saying "EtH, Soulja Boi IS dope. You just have to hear his shit properly".

There is absolutely NO possible way in the English language, what so ever......AT ALL.....that PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD will ever...EVER....rhyme with each other.


The "LY" is a HUGE part of the GODLY FUED rhyme. It's by a landslide the most emphasised sound in those words. It's nowhere to be seen in PROBABLE.

PROBAH
GODLY

Not even similar in any aspect.

But it gets even worse.

FUED / BLE (Or BULL if you want to write it out like that)

FEUD and BULL.....WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?


Yeah absolutely miles past my comprehension here. If you can rhyme those two words, then Cabbage and Banana should be pretty damn similar as well.




EDIT: Beyond this, for the most part Phrox's verse rhymes fairly well. But in addition, it's ABSOLUTELY forced too. "MECCA STATUS; GODLY FEUD". That's ridiculously forced yet no one says it.

Originally Posted by Jason

you also gotta take into consideration that he went 32 lines rhyming the same words.
granted, thats not an excuse to do things incorrectly .. but im a big picture kinda guy .. i dont sit there and get hung up on every single thing rhyming flawlessly .. its more appreciating the verse as a total package sometimes .. godly feud / probable is a not a great multi but when i read it i instantly know that they match and flow together.. its all in the way its said

if you got a preschooler to rhyme: cat, hat, bat, car .. you would see that "car" doesnt rhyme

just like if you got a preschooler to rhyme "racist endeavours" and "praying together" they would not rhyme

but ... in a text battle ... car and cat dont rhyme
but in a text battle .. praying together and racist endeavours do rhyme cus of the way the writing is

its contextual

not arguing with your overall point though

I'd be the same, but with that one multi (which this isn't about, I don't mean to JUST take shots at Phrox. Seems everyone agrees about ReeF haha), with that multi I had to stop and make sure it was supposed to rhyme with the first one. I wasn't trying to pick stuff out but straight away I had to read over some stuff again to find what I was supposed to be rhyming with. For example, probable flows off like one word. It's quite a quickly said word. When you hit godly feud, it's MUCH slower and has the glottal stop in the middle (is it still called glottal when it's actually a space?). Straight away the flow got fucked up from that to me and I would have to adjust how I'd go about reading from then on.

How the fuck does cat rhyme with car in preschool?

Originally Posted by Jason

you also gotta take into consideration that he went 32 lines rhyming the same words.
granted, thats not an excuse to do things incorrectly .. but im a big picture kinda guy .. i dont sit there and get hung up on every single thing rhyming flawlessly .. its more appreciating the verse as a total package sometimes .. godly feud / probable is a not a great multi but when i read it i instantly know that they match and flow together.. its all in the way its said

if you got a preschooler to rhyme: cat, hat, bat, car .. you would see that "car" doesnt rhyme

just like if you got a preschooler to rhyme "racist endeavours" and "praying together" they would not rhyme

but ... in a text battle ... car and cat dont rhyme
but in a text battle .. praying together and racist endeavours do rhyme cus of the way the writing is

its contextual

not arguing with your overall point though

I'd be the same, but with that one multi (which this isn't about, I don't mean to JUST take shots at Phrox. Seems everyone agrees about ReeF haha), with that multi I had to stop and make sure it was supposed to rhyme with the first one. I wasn't trying to pick stuff out but straight away I had to read over some stuff again to find what I was supposed to be rhyming with. For example, probable flows off like one word. It's quite a quickly said word. When you hit godly feud, it's MUCH slower and has the glottal stop in the middle (is it still called glottal when it's actually a space?). Straight away the flow got fucked up from that to me and I would have to adjust how I'd go about reading from then on.

How the fuck does cat rhyme with car in preschool?

The Pettis punch was really good.

The Pettis punch was really good.