SHODAN

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Honestly I kind of like doin my own thing in some ways as far as my writing. I know people are big on wordplay going both ways, which I am too but some times I'm not going for that. Example - the Produce bar. I was just going for a big picture idea as in things at a store, produce being one of them. Then my set up of 'Looking for a meal' & leaving w that chicken. I just do things a little different. I get that it could have been executed better & all that but I think you sometimes don't consider other people's way of writing, you just base everything off of how YOU would write it & that's not a good look imo. Not everyone should have to sound like you for you to think it's a good bar, nahmean? You may not think so but there is a big difference in what I can write & what an amateur on here can.

Working close shifts - back to back shifts, close together.
A myth can be a person or thing, it's not only just a story/folk tale

Idk man, I guess we see things differently & that's fine. We obviously have 2 completely different writing styles.

---------- Post added at 09:40 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:36 PM ----------

I think you overlook things that people write because it's not written in your style, so because of that you're quick to downgrade what they're capable of.

[B U R D E N]

Honestly I kind of like doin my own thing in some ways as far as my writing. I know people are big on wordplay going both ways, which I am too but some times I'm not going for that. Example - the Produce bar. I was just going for a big picture idea as in things at a store, produce being one of them. Then my set up of 'Looking for a meal' & leaving w that chicken. I just do things a little different. I get that it could have been executed better & all that but I think you sometimes don't consider other people's way of writing, you just base everything off of how YOU would write it & that's not a good look imo. Not everyone should have to sound like you for you to think it's a good bar, nahmean? You may not think so but there is a big difference in what I can write & what an amateur on here can.

Working close shifts - back to back shifts, close together.
A myth can be a person or thing, it's not only just a story/folk tale

Idk man, I guess we see things differently & that's fine. We obviously have 2 completely different writing styles.

---------- Post added at 09:40 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:36 PM ----------

I think you overlook things that people write because it's not written in your style, so because of that you're quick to downgrade what they're capable of.