For various reasons, I feel Lord Moor, MC KG, and RAPpintor weren't able to hold up to the other two bars that stood out to me, and if they want they can PM me so I can explain why that's so. Between Coffin and Wonderbred, I was torn between what I felt was the cleaner read and what was the bar that best stuck to the concept given, on one hand, I wasn't able to really get Wonder's bar without doing some research, but it definitely read cleaner than Coffin's and would've probably hit harder in an actual battle. On the other hand, Coffin's bar definitely stuck to the concept better and was more relevant throughout, although some of the wording was a bit iffy and the final punch was a bit played (cum/come lines don't hit hard nowadays).
Felt I had to go with preference here.
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