Hip hop that's not draconian

Originally Posted by Babylon

Shit was cool. It still suffers from the same shit almost every other "Imma go hard with lyrics cus everybody is shallow and has nothing to say" approach lacks. Like using the same monotone pitch the entire verse, I dont think he used a vocal inflection even once. Multis & flow structure are adept, but it feels like an incomplete picture if you listen to this through any other filter than some slam poetry over-focusing/only focusing on content perspective.

^^ thought the same it was good but... idk something felt a bit off? when the beat changed though it started to get better but then went the same as before he just needs to be more hype an get more into it sounds like his reading to much i think thats what it is.


fuck the system tho. yes good songs with meaning an a message are good there very much needed, sometimes i find them cringe though if someone over does it, you have to do it correctly imo and sometimes its nice to have a bit of both types of songs too.

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Originally Posted by Babylon

Shit was cool. It still suffers from the same shit almost every other "Imma go hard with lyrics cus everybody is shallow and has nothing to say" approach lacks. Like using the same monotone pitch the entire verse, I dont think he used a vocal inflection even once. Multis & flow structure are adept, but it feels like an incomplete picture if you listen to this through any other filter than some slam poetry over-focusing/only focusing on content perspective.

^^ thought the same it was good but... idk something felt a bit off? when the beat changed though it started to get better but then went the same as before he just needs to be more hype an get more into it sounds like his reading to much i think thats what it is.


fuck the system tho. yes good songs with meaning an a message are good there very much needed, sometimes i find them cringe though if someone over does it, you have to do it correctly imo and sometimes its nice to have a bit of both types of songs too.

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