Considering doing some live battles, need help with image

[Shodan]

@Lockhart Fair enough. The fact that almost every honest person with a clue accuses me of shit like bad wording, bad multies, bad execution, etc. is enough to convince me that it's there, but I can't see it no matter how hard I look. It all looks great to me. I suppose that I am getting so caught-up in my own brilliance that I can't see what anyone else does when I look at them.

If you would be so kind as to point out a particularly severe example (from a battle I actually tried in) and demonstrate to me what you didn't like about the wording in it, it would be greatly appreciated.

[Shodan]

@Lockhart Fair enough. The fact that almost every honest person with a clue accuses me of shit like bad wording, bad multies, bad execution, etc. is enough to convince me that it's there, but I can't see it no matter how hard I look. It all looks great to me. I suppose that I am getting so caught-up in my own brilliance that I can't see what anyone else does when I look at them.

If you would be so kind as to point out a particularly severe example (from a battle I actually tried in) and demonstrate to me what you didn't like about the wording in it, it would be greatly appreciated.