Opinoins Please

[masterc]

Posted on another site against someone with the user name Jay. wanted to see what everyone thinks.

I'm hittin this "Jay" like Jordan when he fades back/
Leave him blue like the bird wit the way that I slay tracks//
You need lay back listen to Em, Pac, and Dre tracks/
Cuz tryin to beat me's like runnin in circles bitch, race tracks//
You're a mid level rapper just like ya name alphabetically see/
Ya just the Jay that makes everyone want to get some Z's/
Learn what meta's for please, Cuz I spit sick shit like crazy/
You words played G, and ya punches like glass joe's dont even phase me//
I land mine in multis, so sit back and Watch Man like ya names McNulty/
Not understanding me fully, this elementary shit, so ya ass get bullied//
No deceipt ya flow is weak and ya know that ya beat/
You see me I rock Jay's like the shoes on my feet//
Work ya vocab son, get a dictionary/
Cuz I could out rap you while just playin pictionary//
Last name start wit a K? Cuz ya kidding me right/
You KO'd like Jay Bell in a McClellan fight//

Expos - Some are obvious but will put em anyway 3rd bar - reference to him comparing himself to Jay Z in another battle, and letter J in the middle of the alphabet.4th bar - Metas for = metaphor used the different categories battle raps based on in my lines, metas, multis, punches, flow, vocab.4th bar - Glass Joe is the first and weakest fighter on Mike Tysons Punchout5th bar - Kevin McNulty was in the movie Watchman8th bar - Jay Bell is pro boxer got KO'd in twenty seconds by McClellan

[masterc]

Posted on another site against someone with the user name Jay. wanted to see what everyone thinks.

I'm hittin this "Jay" like Jordan when he fades back/
Leave him blue like the bird wit the way that I slay tracks//
You need lay back listen to Em, Pac, and Dre tracks/
Cuz tryin to beat me's like runnin in circles bitch, race tracks//
You're a mid level rapper just like ya name alphabetically see/
Ya just the Jay that makes everyone want to get some Z's/
Learn what meta's for please, Cuz I spit sick shit like crazy/
You words played G, and ya punches like glass joe's dont even phase me//
I land mine in multis, so sit back and Watch Man like ya names McNulty/
Not understanding me fully, this elementary shit, so ya ass get bullied//
No deceipt ya flow is weak and ya know that ya beat/
You see me I rock Jay's like the shoes on my feet//
Work ya vocab son, get a dictionary/
Cuz I could out rap you while just playin pictionary//
Last name start wit a K? Cuz ya kidding me right/
You KO'd like Jay Bell in a McClellan fight//

Expos - Some are obvious but will put em anyway 3rd bar - reference to him comparing himself to Jay Z in another battle, and letter J in the middle of the alphabet.4th bar - Metas for = metaphor used the different categories battle raps based on in my lines, metas, multis, punches, flow, vocab.4th bar - Glass Joe is the first and weakest fighter on Mike Tysons Punchout5th bar - Kevin McNulty was in the movie Watchman8th bar - Jay Bell is pro boxer got KO'd in twenty seconds by McClellan