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[Spooky|Deep]

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C'mon Eric ......... It's Spooky, HENCE THE 'WEIRDO TYPE' ... the backstabbin bad guy WHEN YA HEROES DIE!! (Hear Ohs) ... & I'm "Infamous"-Too cuz ya ex|MEMBA HERE GHOSTWRITES!! (He's Infamous ES) I wrote Shit-Fa-This-Dude ... the p|M WAS CLEAR, NO LIE!! Everybody HEED THIS: I've been gettin E-GIPPED/egypt cuz you AIN'T DAMN PHARAOHS!! (Fair Ohs) ... This faggot CHEATED now he in some 'DEEP SHIT' like it's too late to go "STRAIGHT AND NARROW" (phrase) ... cuz I'm HEATED so you about to get 'BEAT BITCH' like pimps-do-hoes-who under|PAY THEM THEIR DOUGH!! (short w/ $) FUCK SOLO, without ME IT'S just a WEAK CLIQUE with simple-flows-too ... plus more FAKE THAN FAIR VOTES!! My rhymes is 'out of this world', I'm CRAFTY WITH YOU SNAKES and SOLO DEVILS ... He wanna "BLAST ME INTO SPACE" cuz I'm above OZONE LEVEL//Ohs own level ......... EZ

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[Spooky|Deep]

The whole verse, every line ... I'm lookin for flaws

C'mon Eric ......... It's Spooky, HENCE THE 'WEIRDO TYPE' ... the backstabbin bad guy WHEN YA HEROES DIE!! (Hear Ohs) ... & I'm "Infamous"-Too cuz ya ex|MEMBA HERE GHOSTWRITES!! (He's Infamous ES) I wrote Shit-Fa-This-Dude ... the p|M WAS CLEAR, NO LIE!! Everybody HEED THIS: I've been gettin E-GIPPED/egypt cuz you AIN'T DAMN PHARAOHS!! (Fair Ohs) ... This faggot CHEATED now he in some 'DEEP SHIT' like it's too late to go "STRAIGHT AND NARROW" (phrase) ... cuz I'm HEATED so you about to get 'BEAT BITCH' like pimps-do-hoes-who under|PAY THEM THEIR DOUGH!! (short w/ $) FUCK SOLO, without ME IT'S just a WEAK CLIQUE with simple-flows-too ... plus more FAKE THAN FAIR VOTES!! My rhymes is 'out of this world', I'm CRAFTY WITH YOU SNAKES and SOLO DEVILS ... He wanna "BLAST ME INTO SPACE" cuz I'm above OZONE LEVEL//Ohs own level ......... EZ

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