Catharsis vs FAME ROUND 2 CATHARSIS WINS!!

[Red Dot]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Thought FAME took this category by a hair, but both did pretty good in this category.
Vocabulary - Catharsis
Topic/Meaning - I personally felt FAME's piece more. The direction he went was unique and I could relate more to it.
Storytelling/Progression - This is a tough call, I think Catharsis had a good story line and it prgressed more and unfolded a bit better. Going with Catharsis in this category.
Emotion - this is tough as well. I think FAME got this by a hair IMO.
Imagery - Catharsis/
Poetic Techniques - FAME got this, i was feeling the way he spoke of a man who had it all and let it go because of pride.
Ending - i'm leaning more towards FAME on this one, just because i feel like Cath went off on tangents a bit when he talked about different people. both

Overall- Tough call. but I'mma give my vote to FAME

[Red Dot]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Thought FAME took this category by a hair, but both did pretty good in this category.
Vocabulary - Catharsis
Topic/Meaning - I personally felt FAME's piece more. The direction he went was unique and I could relate more to it.
Storytelling/Progression - This is a tough call, I think Catharsis had a good story line and it prgressed more and unfolded a bit better. Going with Catharsis in this category.
Emotion - this is tough as well. I think FAME got this by a hair IMO.
Imagery - Catharsis/
Poetic Techniques - FAME got this, i was feeling the way he spoke of a man who had it all and let it go because of pride.
Ending - i'm leaning more towards FAME on this one, just because i feel like Cath went off on tangents a bit when he talked about different people. both

Overall- Tough call. but I'mma give my vote to FAME

[Prose_]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- this is pretty fucking close. i feel like the rhyme schemes of both didnt outshine the other. ima give this a tie.
Vocabulary- vocab wise i felt this was Cath's. his word use with his rhymes seemed a slight bit more creative at times.
Topic/Meaning- Cath... the metaphor of a tidal wave was nice but the actually image of it stuck harder.
Storytelling/Progression- ok.. ima give this to FAME. he carried his story stanza by stanza a bit more quickly.
Emotion- this was pretty close to me. fuck. hate when its action versus heart. screw it. ima go wit FAME. his from start to finish was emotional while Cath's turned into a comedy about ignorance for a small time period then went back to seriousness.
Imagery- the description in Cath's drop sold this. the scene was painted a bit better
Poetic Techniques-FAME took this one. the metaphor of a tidal wave crashing on his life scooped this one ez.
Ending- Cath took this one. the lead up close to his ending coupled with the creativity of comparing ignorant americans with foreigners like that was very dope to me.

Overall- vote goes to Cath.

[Prose_]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- this is pretty fucking close. i feel like the rhyme schemes of both didnt outshine the other. ima give this a tie.
Vocabulary- vocab wise i felt this was Cath's. his word use with his rhymes seemed a slight bit more creative at times.
Topic/Meaning- Cath... the metaphor of a tidal wave was nice but the actually image of it stuck harder.
Storytelling/Progression- ok.. ima give this to FAME. he carried his story stanza by stanza a bit more quickly.
Emotion- this was pretty close to me. fuck. hate when its action versus heart. screw it. ima go wit FAME. his from start to finish was emotional while Cath's turned into a comedy about ignorance for a small time period then went back to seriousness.
Imagery- the description in Cath's drop sold this. the scene was painted a bit better
Poetic Techniques-FAME took this one. the metaphor of a tidal wave crashing on his life scooped this one ez.
Ending- Cath took this one. the lead up close to his ending coupled with the creativity of comparing ignorant americans with foreigners like that was very dope to me.

Overall- vote goes to Cath.

[NelSyn]

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Catharsis started strong w/ a nice opening line & stayed consistant afterwards.

Vocabulary: Catharsis had the more efficient vocab, it really brought his verse to a new level.

Topic/Meaning: FAME stayed on topic well & described the scenery really well.

Storytelling/Progression: TIE Too close to call.
Emotion: Catharsis had much more build to his emotion.

Imagery: FAME put a much better & clearer picture about the time frame, in my head.

Poetic Techniques: TIE both had amazing use of all poetic techniques.

Ending: Catharsis had the more clever ending. TBH, that's how he won this category. Oh & enjoyment while reading this line.

MVGT- Catharsis. He had a much more efficient verse, although he didn't win all the categories, he still won the important ones, over FAME...

[NelSyn]

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Catharsis started strong w/ a nice opening line & stayed consistant afterwards.

Vocabulary: Catharsis had the more efficient vocab, it really brought his verse to a new level.

Topic/Meaning: FAME stayed on topic well & described the scenery really well.

Storytelling/Progression: TIE Too close to call.
Emotion: Catharsis had much more build to his emotion.

Imagery: FAME put a much better & clearer picture about the time frame, in my head.

Poetic Techniques: TIE both had amazing use of all poetic techniques.

Ending: Catharsis had the more clever ending. TBH, that's how he won this category. Oh & enjoyment while reading this line.

MVGT- Catharsis. He had a much more efficient verse, although he didn't win all the categories, he still won the important ones, over FAME...

[RhetoriK]

i'm not voting for crew objectivity, however i will say good job to the both of ya good luck

[RhetoriK]

i'm not voting for crew objectivity, however i will say good job to the both of ya good luck

[B U R D E N]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Catharsis
Vocabulary- again Catharsis
Topic/Meaning- Cath did his thing
Storytelling/Progression- this was close.. i think FAME edged it. the storytelling was on point from both.
Emotion- both did good here but real talk I'm giving this to Fame. that's just my opinion.. both did their thing.
Imagery- Catharsis painted a solid picture with a bit more creativity
Poetic Techniques- TIE i don't want to pick lol it was close
Ending- Catharsis got it and gets my vote. His verse had a lot more creativity and build to everything. Respect to both.. both of you had some good shit but my vote goes to Cath. Peace!

[B U R D E N]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Catharsis
Vocabulary- again Catharsis
Topic/Meaning- Cath did his thing
Storytelling/Progression- this was close.. i think FAME edged it. the storytelling was on point from both.
Emotion- both did good here but real talk I'm giving this to Fame. that's just my opinion.. both did their thing.
Imagery- Catharsis painted a solid picture with a bit more creativity
Poetic Techniques- TIE i don't want to pick lol it was close
Ending- Catharsis got it and gets my vote. His verse had a lot more creativity and build to everything. Respect to both.. both of you had some good shit but my vote goes to Cath. Peace!

[Erupt da Monsta]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Cath took this
Vocabulary-Cath
Topic/Meaning-Tie
Storytelling/Progression- Fame, was close,
Emotion-fame- was close
Imagery- Tie
Poetic Techniques- Tie
Ending- Felt cath was more creative with his ending here

Overall i felt one was a little more creative, was actually really close imo, but vote gos to CATHARSIS

[Erupt da Monsta]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Cath took this
Vocabulary-Cath
Topic/Meaning-Tie
Storytelling/Progression- Fame, was close,
Emotion-fame- was close
Imagery- Tie
Poetic Techniques- Tie
Ending- Felt cath was more creative with his ending here

Overall i felt one was a little more creative, was actually really close imo, but vote gos to CATHARSIS

[IV]

4-1 to Cath and FAME is banned. Cath progresses to the next round! Congrats.

[IV]

4-1 to Cath and FAME is banned. Cath progresses to the next round! Congrats.

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