DonoTheGod Vs Wigsplit

[IV]

Voting Rubix

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - both had same sort of style - simple yet effective. A couple lines from both could had done with perfecting if i was to be extremely picky. So close I can barely call it. Gunna have to say Dono just for the one little mistake that made me stumble on Wiggys verse.

Vocabulary - Again nobody's vocab was really that stretched, both kept it pretty simple. But there were points where Dono showed signs of a wider rang of vocab.

Topic/Meaning - Honestly you two couldn't have made this harder. You took it from the different angles which is what i really loved about reading this. It really shows that Poets fuck shit up and Goons are our victims. Would be nice on a collab cypher. But anyway... Both fitted the picture extremely well, but i guess the majority off Edgars verse was more relevant to the picture. (Fuck you though)

Storytelling/Progression - Both good, both different angles, really hard to chose but i slightly preferred Edgars storyline, clear beginning middle and end which all took place during the 'scene' that's in the topic.

Emotion- Dono. Crazy emotion really felt what you were saying and can relate to it extremely well from a personal experience. Emotion is a hard thing to get across in writing and you really cracked it well done.

Poetic Techniques - Both similar techniques although different ways of execution. As much as i loved Edgars storyline, as far as 'poetry' goes I think Dono took it.

Ending - Emotion vs comic. If i'm honest I have to go with Edgar here, i really liked the way he wrapped it all up. The last few lines were my favourite of the whole verse.

Overall I see why this topical hasn't had any votes it's so hard to call. You really should make a track with this. Edgar i think you're extremely talented and you know I love your style of topicals and this was no exception. Dono i've seen a few of your verses and you've never disappointed, and this was by far my favourite piece of yours that i've read. I'm going to have to give my vote to DonoTheGod because in my opinion he edged Edgar on the techniques used and also the whole emotion and depth of the piece came across really well. Well done this was amazing.

[IV]

Voting Rubix

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - both had same sort of style - simple yet effective. A couple lines from both could had done with perfecting if i was to be extremely picky. So close I can barely call it. Gunna have to say Dono just for the one little mistake that made me stumble on Wiggys verse.

Vocabulary - Again nobody's vocab was really that stretched, both kept it pretty simple. But there were points where Dono showed signs of a wider rang of vocab.

Topic/Meaning - Honestly you two couldn't have made this harder. You took it from the different angles which is what i really loved about reading this. It really shows that Poets fuck shit up and Goons are our victims. Would be nice on a collab cypher. But anyway... Both fitted the picture extremely well, but i guess the majority off Edgars verse was more relevant to the picture. (Fuck you though)

Storytelling/Progression - Both good, both different angles, really hard to chose but i slightly preferred Edgars storyline, clear beginning middle and end which all took place during the 'scene' that's in the topic.

Emotion- Dono. Crazy emotion really felt what you were saying and can relate to it extremely well from a personal experience. Emotion is a hard thing to get across in writing and you really cracked it well done.

Poetic Techniques - Both similar techniques although different ways of execution. As much as i loved Edgars storyline, as far as 'poetry' goes I think Dono took it.

Ending - Emotion vs comic. If i'm honest I have to go with Edgar here, i really liked the way he wrapped it all up. The last few lines were my favourite of the whole verse.

Overall I see why this topical hasn't had any votes it's so hard to call. You really should make a track with this. Edgar i think you're extremely talented and you know I love your style of topicals and this was no exception. Dono i've seen a few of your verses and you've never disappointed, and this was by far my favourite piece of yours that i've read. I'm going to have to give my vote to DonoTheGod because in my opinion he edged Edgar on the techniques used and also the whole emotion and depth of the piece came across really well. Well done this was amazing.

[Dono]

Good breakdown chica.

Appreciate it.

I'll send the bribe money over ASAP.

[Dono]

Good breakdown chica.

Appreciate it.

I'll send the bribe money over ASAP.

[Ohs]

this was mad close, both entertained, dono really suprised me here ima have to go wit wat v said, cuz it pretty much sums it up for me, wig shit was nice, but dono just had a wider range of vocab that reallly was put together quite well, as of right now, i gotta give it to dono

[Ohs]

this was mad close, both entertained, dono really suprised me here ima have to go wit wat v said, cuz it pretty much sums it up for me, wig shit was nice, but dono just had a wider range of vocab that reallly was put together quite well, as of right now, i gotta give it to dono

[STRONTIUM]

As to not contribute to the topical section, I'm not going to leave a big expo or anything. I read this a while ago, wig got me to. I dont really remember, but I do know Dono kept on topic really well and everything was solid, while wig really seemed to have rushed his and the story wasent quite as strong. So if you faggots wanna count it, vote = Dono.

FUCK THE TOPICAL SECTION! Huey J and EtH > Topicals

[STRONTIUM]

As to not contribute to the topical section, I'm not going to leave a big expo or anything. I read this a while ago, wig got me to. I dont really remember, but I do know Dono kept on topic really well and everything was solid, while wig really seemed to have rushed his and the story wasent quite as strong. So if you faggots wanna count it, vote = Dono.

FUCK THE TOPICAL SECTION! Huey J and EtH > Topicals

[Wigsplit]

Dono Wins 3-0 KO!!!!!

[Wigsplit]

Dono Wins 3-0 KO!!!!!