Hip hop that's not draconian

Originally Posted by Babylon

Shit was cool. It still suffers from the same shit almost every other "Imma go hard with lyrics cus everybody is shallow and has nothing to say" approach lacks. Like using the same monotone pitch the entire verse, I dont think he used a vocal inflection even once. Multis & flow structure are adept, but it feels like an incomplete picture if you listen to this through any other filter than some slam poetry over-focusing/only focusing on content perspective.

^^ thought the same it was good but... idk something felt a bit off? when the beat changed though it started to get better but then went the same as before he just needs to be more hype an get more into it sounds like his reading to much i think thats what it is.


fuck the system tho. yes good songs with meaning an a message are good there very much needed, sometimes i find them cringe though if someone over does it, you have to do it correctly imo and sometimes its nice to have a bit of both types of songs too.

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Originally Posted by Babylon

Shit was cool. It still suffers from the same shit almost every other "Imma go hard with lyrics cus everybody is shallow and has nothing to say" approach lacks. Like using the same monotone pitch the entire verse, I dont think he used a vocal inflection even once. Multis & flow structure are adept, but it feels like an incomplete picture if you listen to this through any other filter than some slam poetry over-focusing/only focusing on content perspective.

^^ thought the same it was good but... idk something felt a bit off? when the beat changed though it started to get better but then went the same as before he just needs to be more hype an get more into it sounds like his reading to much i think thats what it is.


fuck the system tho. yes good songs with meaning an a message are good there very much needed, sometimes i find them cringe though if someone over does it, you have to do it correctly imo and sometimes its nice to have a bit of both types of songs too.

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R.A The Rugged Man is a dope lyricist, that dude is always saying how mainstream music/rappers are wack, seems like some people have an idea you can only be kinda either underground, lyrically dope with a good message or you straight up catchy mainstream with a shit message or no message at all i wonder what it would sound like if an artist combined both of those ways into one...

R.A The Rugged Man is a dope lyricist, that dude is always saying how mainstream music/rappers are wack, seems like some people have an idea you can only be kinda either underground, lyrically dope with a good message or you straight up catchy mainstream with a shit message or no message at all i wonder what it would sound like if an artist combined both of those ways into one...

keep calm n bump shad, juhearddd

keep calm n bump shad, juhearddd

[Esso]

i appreciate the pen but why's he gotta SOUND like he's reading it off his phone? Where's the emotion and changes of tone? How you say something sometimes matters just as much as what youre saying.

[Esso]

i appreciate the pen but why's he gotta SOUND like he's reading it off his phone? Where's the emotion and changes of tone? How you say something sometimes matters just as much as what youre saying.