Audio Cypher.

Uhm, this is only the third time I've rapped on a beat, or anything like that.
So, I would really like some feedback, and really blunt criticism, as harsh as possible.

http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...069&section=lb

PS, I recorded it with my built in mic on my laptop, so the quality really sucks. I posted the lyrics.

Uhm, this is only the third time I've rapped on a beat, or anything like that.
So, I would really like some feedback, and really blunt criticism, as harsh as possible.

http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...069&section=lb

PS, I recorded it with my built in mic on my laptop, so the quality really sucks. I posted the lyrics.

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