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Audio cypher.
Uhm, this is only the third time I've rapped on a beat, or anything like that.
So, I would really like some feedback, and really blunt criticism, as harsh as possible.
http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...069§ion=lb
PS, I recorded it with my built in mic on my laptop, so the quality really sucks. I posted the lyrics.
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Audio cypher.
Uhm, this is only the third time I've rapped on a beat, or anything like that.
So, I would really like some feedback, and really blunt criticism, as harsh as possible.
http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...069§ion=lb
PS, I recorded it with my built in mic on my laptop, so the quality really sucks. I posted the lyrics.
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you need to get a real mic, man..hard to hear you...sounds like you've got a West Coast flow...actually...thats a nice lil flow you got there...lyrically hard to understand...good mic presence. some raw talent...i'd keep going with it
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you need to get a real mic, man..hard to hear you...sounds like you've got a West Coast flow...actually...thats a nice lil flow you got there...lyrically hard to understand...good mic presence. some raw talent...i'd keep going with it
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...This is C Teezy?
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...This is C Teezy?
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I own a condenser mic, but that's it. I don't have like a stand, or shock mount, or any of that stuff for it. And I never bothered to learn how to use mixing software, and stuff. I might do a little track on audacity, though, if I get some decent feed from this. I was standing up, also, so that really made it a lot harder to hear.
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I own a condenser mic, but that's it. I don't have like a stand, or shock mount, or any of that stuff for it. And I never bothered to learn how to use mixing software, and stuff. I might do a little track on audacity, though, if I get some decent feed from this. I was standing up, also, so that really made it a lot harder to hear.
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I know, it's a really big let down from the actual C Teezy.
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wait...YOU are CTeezy?? lmfao...dude go away
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whats a loon.. & how does balling like them get it poppin?? 
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whats a loon.. & how does balling like them get it poppin??
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Loons are people who are crazy, and I'm not balling like them I'm referring to it as a generalization for a person, as in calling them a lunatick. Iunno. It wasn't even wordplay. So, why do you assume that it's wordplay? I already had this conversation with Jason. And I guess people who ball get it poppin? Iunno, I'm white, my slang isn't that good.
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Loons are people who are crazy, and I'm not balling like them I'm referring to it as a generalization for a person, as in calling them a lunatick. Iunno. It wasn't even wordplay. So, why do you assume that it's wordplay? I already had this conversation with Jason. And I guess people who ball get it poppin? Iunno, I'm white, my slang isn't that good.
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Loons are people who are crazy, and I'm not balling like them I'm referring to it as a generalization for a person, as in calling them a lunatick. Iunno. It wasn't even wordplay. So, why do you assume that it's wordplay? I already had this conversation with Jason. And I guess people who ball get it poppin? Iunno, I'm white, my slang isn't that good.
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Loons are people who are crazy, and I'm not balling like them I'm referring to it as a generalization for a person, as in calling them a lunatick. Iunno. It wasn't even wordplay. So, why do you assume that it's wordplay? I already had this conversation with Jason. And I guess people who ball get it poppin? Iunno, I'm white, my slang isn't that good.
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