QUICK SAMPLE TRACK - New Album 2014 "Armbar"

[Danjer DRoss]

This is a song called "Armbar" I only did about 6 bars (8) but they are divided because my beat is wierd...This beat is from 2005

Song: Armbar
Beat: "Unknown" Horror-Hip Hop (Dark Hop)


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WS5K...ature=youtu.be


Everything in the description talks about the copyright. Also the lyrics are copyright.

The lyrics are hard to understand maybe because THEY ARE NOT MASTERED so here are the lyrics to this song (remember, they are under LEGAL and PAID copyright)

I'll only stop Rhymin' when the world stops Spinnin,
I'll stop Smilin' when your GIRL STOPS GRINNIN

Maybe stop killin if the world destroys all the guns

I'll become a Cathlolic Priest just to FUCK A COUPLE 'A NUNS

Insults come to me like it's a second Nature

I'm talkin shit about "Tamy" because I fucking HATE HER!

My life could be OVER IN A MINUTE
But if I'm goin' Down I'm a take a fuckin' COUPLE WIT IT'

yes the song is finished, but I will be making a lot of changes. I think you guys will love this song when I publish it...It has a really fast rip, and it has some fucked up things...


Expos:
1.I am Catholic but do not practice, so that is where that joke came from - Plus everyone imagines fucking a nun...lol
2. I talk about "TAMI" That is the girl who caused my divorce (well, I have not signed any papers, but they are coming this week)...So that is why I name drop her (which I do several times in the song, but you won't hear that part yet!!!)
3. "Take a couple "wit it" is a subliminal thing about "suicide" and "Murder" talking about taking a "couple" with it...But it is also something showing the end of a relationship and not actually talking about killing myself or anyone (so please don't take it like that)


Feedback?

Yes I edited everything - THIS WAS NOT MY PRO MIC! I DID ALL OF THIS IN 20 MINUTES OR LESS (editing and all) Beat is OLD and YES YOU CAN USE IT but not to make money...Let me know if you are interested in the beat, you can have it free for fun...If you want to COLLAB on this song I will pass ALL THE LYRICS to you, you delete where you put your bars, (no you don't get paid, it is the other way around...You pay me $25usd to send to production and see if any labels would pick it up) Or you pay nothing and get 30% of any revenue (but if you pay for the shipping and handling aka the $25 and it makes money, it is 50%/50%)

GUYS I AM GOING THROUGH FUCKED UP SHIT...Always have...I am getting OLD...I still have a chance to get on a lable if I can get my shit together...I just want ONE cool song.

GIVE HONEST FEEDBACK!!! EVEN IF IT IS NOT YOUR STYLE.

One love and all that shit...

-Danjer

[Danjer DRoss]

This is a song called "Armbar" I only did about 6 bars (8) but they are divided because my beat is wierd...This beat is from 2005

Song: Armbar
Beat: "Unknown" Horror-Hip Hop (Dark Hop)


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WS5K...ature=youtu.be


Everything in the description talks about the copyright. Also the lyrics are copyright.

The lyrics are hard to understand maybe because THEY ARE NOT MASTERED so here are the lyrics to this song (remember, they are under LEGAL and PAID copyright)

I'll only stop Rhymin' when the world stops Spinnin,
I'll stop Smilin' when your GIRL STOPS GRINNIN

Maybe stop killin if the world destroys all the guns

I'll become a Cathlolic Priest just to FUCK A COUPLE 'A NUNS

Insults come to me like it's a second Nature

I'm talkin shit about "Tamy" because I fucking HATE HER!

My life could be OVER IN A MINUTE
But if I'm goin' Down I'm a take a fuckin' COUPLE WIT IT'

yes the song is finished, but I will be making a lot of changes. I think you guys will love this song when I publish it...It has a really fast rip, and it has some fucked up things...


Expos:
1.I am Catholic but do not practice, so that is where that joke came from - Plus everyone imagines fucking a nun...lol
2. I talk about "TAMI" That is the girl who caused my divorce (well, I have not signed any papers, but they are coming this week)...So that is why I name drop her (which I do several times in the song, but you won't hear that part yet!!!)
3. "Take a couple "wit it" is a subliminal thing about "suicide" and "Murder" talking about taking a "couple" with it...But it is also something showing the end of a relationship and not actually talking about killing myself or anyone (so please don't take it like that)


Feedback?

Yes I edited everything - THIS WAS NOT MY PRO MIC! I DID ALL OF THIS IN 20 MINUTES OR LESS (editing and all) Beat is OLD and YES YOU CAN USE IT but not to make money...Let me know if you are interested in the beat, you can have it free for fun...If you want to COLLAB on this song I will pass ALL THE LYRICS to you, you delete where you put your bars, (no you don't get paid, it is the other way around...You pay me $25usd to send to production and see if any labels would pick it up) Or you pay nothing and get 30% of any revenue (but if you pay for the shipping and handling aka the $25 and it makes money, it is 50%/50%)

GUYS I AM GOING THROUGH FUCKED UP SHIT...Always have...I am getting OLD...I still have a chance to get on a lable if I can get my shit together...I just want ONE cool song.

GIVE HONEST FEEDBACK!!! EVEN IF IT IS NOT YOUR STYLE.

One love and all that shit...

-Danjer

[Babylon]

How are you going to call like 6 bars of one-two syllable rhyming a track?

[Babylon]

How are you going to call like 6 bars of one-two syllable rhyming a track?

[Danjer DRoss]

Originally Posted by Crysis

How are you going to call like 6 bars of one-two syllable rhyming a track?

?? I said it was a quick Demo, I am asking about SOUND quality without mastering, not to mention that is my beat...Also the intro gives an idea of the TYPE of song it will be...

This is NOT A "track" it says DEMO, SAMPLE, etc...What the fuck is your problem? Really? Did you even read anything I wrote or just read the title and watch the video?

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Originally Posted by GRizzEAT

how u gone expo a track.... LB has failed u.

The same way I'll expo my dick in your mouth...Life has failed you.

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Man, whatever, bout to just delete this...I was trying to get a quick comments about the "style" that I will be using for a COMPLETE SONG, but I just played an unmastered version of a couple of single syll bars...

I don't understand some of you...The funny thing is I have sold tracks that I collabed on, and made decent cash from that shit...Never got famous because I am not good enough, or maybe never tried...The thing is, I am getting older, i want to finish my Album I started YEARS AGO and I just wanted to see what people thought about the basic sound of this track "ARMBAR"

Also, wtf...seriously, you guys are keyboard warriors...I bet you my bank and everything I own...You stepped up to me face to face you would not say shit...We would not NEED to fight because you would just say "fuck that"...Or be a pussy and shoot me.


Whatever anyway, you guys think all rhymes gotta be triple schemed multi's? THIS IS THE OPENER OF THE SONG...Your feedback does not help me. I CAME HERE FOR HELP...FFS

[Danjer DRoss]

Originally Posted by Crysis

How are you going to call like 6 bars of one-two syllable rhyming a track?

?? I said it was a quick Demo, I am asking about SOUND quality without mastering, not to mention that is my beat...Also the intro gives an idea of the TYPE of song it will be...

This is NOT A "track" it says DEMO, SAMPLE, etc...What the fuck is your problem? Really? Did you even read anything I wrote or just read the title and watch the video?

---------- Post added at 02:27 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:25 PM ----------

Originally Posted by GRizzEAT

how u gone expo a track.... LB has failed u.

The same way I'll expo my dick in your mouth...Life has failed you.

---------- Post added at 02:32 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:27 PM ----------

Man, whatever, bout to just delete this...I was trying to get a quick comments about the "style" that I will be using for a COMPLETE SONG, but I just played an unmastered version of a couple of single syll bars...

I don't understand some of you...The funny thing is I have sold tracks that I collabed on, and made decent cash from that shit...Never got famous because I am not good enough, or maybe never tried...The thing is, I am getting older, i want to finish my Album I started YEARS AGO and I just wanted to see what people thought about the basic sound of this track "ARMBAR"

Also, wtf...seriously, you guys are keyboard warriors...I bet you my bank and everything I own...You stepped up to me face to face you would not say shit...We would not NEED to fight because you would just say "fuck that"...Or be a pussy and shoot me.


Whatever anyway, you guys think all rhymes gotta be triple schemed multi's? THIS IS THE OPENER OF THE SONG...Your feedback does not help me. I CAME HERE FOR HELP...FFS

Originally Posted by Danjer

Also, wtf...seriously, you guys are keyboard warriors...I bet you my bank and everything I own...You stepped up to me face to face you would not say shit...We would not NEED to fight because you would just say "fuck that"...Or be a pussy and shoot me.

Nah, I seen you get knocked out by a bitch. I would throw the hands.










































Then I would divorce you.

Originally Posted by Danjer

Also, wtf...seriously, you guys are keyboard warriors...I bet you my bank and everything I own...You stepped up to me face to face you would not say shit...We would not NEED to fight because you would just say "fuck that"...Or be a pussy and shoot me.

Nah, I seen you get knocked out by a bitch. I would throw the hands.










































Then I would divorce you.

[GRizzEAT]

how u gone expo a track.... LB has failed u.

[GRizzEAT]

how u gone expo a track.... LB has failed u.

[Babylon]

Lol, you're ass fam. I've never made a track & could make a diss that shits on your entire persona.

You can't ask for criticism then act hella bitchmade when people tell you the truth. Oh, and stop randomly capitalizing random ass shit in your paragraphs shun, makes you look extra butthurt.

Maybe your wife divorced your bitch ass because you're wasting too much time making terrible tracks instead of attempting to please her with your below average penis size.

[Babylon]

Lol, you're ass fam. I've never made a track & could make a diss that shits on your entire persona.

You can't ask for criticism then act hella bitchmade when people tell you the truth. Oh, and stop randomly capitalizing random ass shit in your paragraphs shun, makes you look extra butthurt.

Maybe your wife divorced your bitch ass because you're wasting too much time making terrible tracks instead of attempting to please her with your below average penis size.

[Danjer DRoss]

Originally Posted by Crysis

Lol, you're ass fam. I've never made a track & could make a diss that shits on your entire persona.

You can't ask for criticism then act hella bitchmade when people tell you the truth. Oh, and stop randomly capitalizing random ass shit in your paragraphs shun, makes you look extra butthurt.

Maybe your wife divorced your bitch ass because you're wasting too much time making terrible tracks instead of attempting to please her with your below average penis size.

YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME ANY CRIT! YOU DUMB FUCK! You made a simple arrogant statement attempting to make me look stupid.

Where is the critisism? The help? The anything? I am not being "bitchmade" you phoney ass punk...I asked for a favour and you gave nothing, then you "got mad" and came back with this bullshit?

Are you fucking kidding me? YOU DID NOT SAY A WORD ABOUT THE QUICK TRACK DEMO except "How you gonna expo a track, LB failed you" wtf is that?

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Also, talk about my fucking wife...This isn't keyboard shit...I have enough cash and FFmiles to fly anywhere...If you fucking met me, I would bet anything you would not say that...Just check out some of my SPARR fights alone...You do realize that I make as much money fighting twice a year than I do as a fucking Engineer...Right? You would not say SHIT if you met me face to face, why don't you finish MIDDLE SCHOOL before telling me how my life is...You don't know shit, so fuck you...


My next song will be called "Horrible Track"

Man, thanks for all these ideas!

[Danjer DRoss]

Originally Posted by Crysis

Lol, you're ass fam. I've never made a track & could make a diss that shits on your entire persona.

You can't ask for criticism then act hella bitchmade when people tell you the truth. Oh, and stop randomly capitalizing random ass shit in your paragraphs shun, makes you look extra butthurt.

Maybe your wife divorced your bitch ass because you're wasting too much time making terrible tracks instead of attempting to please her with your below average penis size.

YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME ANY CRIT! YOU DUMB FUCK! You made a simple arrogant statement attempting to make me look stupid.

Where is the critisism? The help? The anything? I am not being "bitchmade" you phoney ass punk...I asked for a favour and you gave nothing, then you "got mad" and came back with this bullshit?

Are you fucking kidding me? YOU DID NOT SAY A WORD ABOUT THE QUICK TRACK DEMO except "How you gonna expo a track, LB failed you" wtf is that?

---------- Post added at 03:12 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:08 PM ----------

Also, talk about my fucking wife...This isn't keyboard shit...I have enough cash and FFmiles to fly anywhere...If you fucking met me, I would bet anything you would not say that...Just check out some of my SPARR fights alone...You do realize that I make as much money fighting twice a year than I do as a fucking Engineer...Right? You would not say SHIT if you met me face to face, why don't you finish MIDDLE SCHOOL before telling me how my life is...You don't know shit, so fuck you...


My next song will be called "Horrible Track"

Man, thanks for all these ideas!

[Babylon]

Originally Posted by Danjer

YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME ANY CRIT! YOU DUMB FUCK! You made a simple arrogant statement attempting to make me look stupid.

Where is the critisism? The help? The anything? I am not being "bitchmade" you phoney ass punk...I asked for a favour and you gave nothing, then you "got mad" and came back with this bullshit?

Are you fucking kidding me? YOU DID NOT SAY A WORD ABOUT THE QUICK TRACK DEMO except "How you gonna expo a track, LB failed you" wtf is that?

---------- Post added at 03:12 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:08 PM ----------

Also, talk about my fucking wife...This isn't keyboard shit...I have enough cash and FFmiles to fly anywhere...If you fucking met me, I would bet anything you would not say that...Just check out some of my SPARR fights alone...You do realize that I make as much money fighting twice a year than I do as a fucking Engineer...Right? You would not say SHIT if you met me face to face, why don't you finish MIDDLE SCHOOL before telling me how my life is...You don't know shit, so fuck you...


My next song will be called "Horrible Track"

Man, thanks for all these ideas!

Don't tempt the beast son, I'll video tape beating your ass then fuck your wife to the rhythm of my fists. And that was grizz who said that, not me. I gave you feedback by saying stop making tracks with one syllable multi's you failure. Your wife looks like an albino Nelson Mandela, I'm surprised you were stupid enough to even wife that slag. Type of chick to fuck all your friends after finding out how terrible you are in bed then use you talking to that other bitch as an excuse to get out of that tragic ass relationship.

You're in over your head. Don't even reply to this, you don't want this work. Keep whatever semblance of a reputation you have on this website and delete this thread.

EDIT: Ex wife, my bad.

[Babylon]

Originally Posted by Danjer

YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME ANY CRIT! YOU DUMB FUCK! You made a simple arrogant statement attempting to make me look stupid.

Where is the critisism? The help? The anything? I am not being "bitchmade" you phoney ass punk...I asked for a favour and you gave nothing, then you "got mad" and came back with this bullshit?

Are you fucking kidding me? YOU DID NOT SAY A WORD ABOUT THE QUICK TRACK DEMO except "How you gonna expo a track, LB failed you" wtf is that?

---------- Post added at 03:12 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:08 PM ----------

Also, talk about my fucking wife...This isn't keyboard shit...I have enough cash and FFmiles to fly anywhere...If you fucking met me, I would bet anything you would not say that...Just check out some of my SPARR fights alone...You do realize that I make as much money fighting twice a year than I do as a fucking Engineer...Right? You would not say SHIT if you met me face to face, why don't you finish MIDDLE SCHOOL before telling me how my life is...You don't know shit, so fuck you...


My next song will be called "Horrible Track"

Man, thanks for all these ideas!

Don't tempt the beast son, I'll video tape beating your ass then fuck your wife to the rhythm of my fists. And that was grizz who said that, not me. I gave you feedback by saying stop making tracks with one syllable multi's you failure. Your wife looks like an albino Nelson Mandela, I'm surprised you were stupid enough to even wife that slag. Type of chick to fuck all your friends after finding out how terrible you are in bed then use you talking to that other bitch as an excuse to get out of that tragic ass relationship.

You're in over your head. Don't even reply to this, you don't want this work. Keep whatever semblance of a reputation you have on this website and delete this thread.

EDIT: Ex wife, my bad.

[Danjer DRoss]

Originally Posted by Crysis

Don't tempt the beast son, I'll video tape beating your ass then fuck your wife to the rhythm of my fists. And that was grizz who said that, not me. I gave you feedback by saying stop making tracks with one syllable multi's you failure. Your wife looks like an albino Nelson Mandela, I'm surprised you were stupid enough to even wife that slag. Type of chick to fuck all your friends after finding out how terrible you are in bed then use you talking to that other bitch as an excuse to get out of that tragic ass relationship.

You're in over your head. Don't even reply to this, you don't want this work. Keep whatever semblance of a reputation you have on this website and delete this thread.

EDIT: Ex wife, my bad.

I'll pay for your ticket, or mine...You wanna come here, or me go there? I will be in Florida in March 2015...But let me know...I would love to have a nice video of that attempt.

What's mommy making you for dinner? Did she give you money to have fun with your friends today? If not, let me know, I can send some to your bank accou....ohhhh, you have to have a bank account first...Well, sorry...PayP....ohhhh, you have to be 18 and have a credit card...

I will just send you a Cheque...ohhhh, I don't use cheques anymore, sorry buddy...Wish I could help you :o

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I just think Crysis wants to either...

A. Suck my dick (really)
B. Fuck me wife (sorry, Ex-wife)
C. Wishes he had half the skill as me in life in general
D. Is a fucking closet case
E. All of the above
F.uck you

[Danjer DRoss]

Originally Posted by Crysis

Don't tempt the beast son, I'll video tape beating your ass then fuck your wife to the rhythm of my fists. And that was grizz who said that, not me. I gave you feedback by saying stop making tracks with one syllable multi's you failure. Your wife looks like an albino Nelson Mandela, I'm surprised you were stupid enough to even wife that slag. Type of chick to fuck all your friends after finding out how terrible you are in bed then use you talking to that other bitch as an excuse to get out of that tragic ass relationship.

You're in over your head. Don't even reply to this, you don't want this work. Keep whatever semblance of a reputation you have on this website and delete this thread.

EDIT: Ex wife, my bad.

I'll pay for your ticket, or mine...You wanna come here, or me go there? I will be in Florida in March 2015...But let me know...I would love to have a nice video of that attempt.

What's mommy making you for dinner? Did she give you money to have fun with your friends today? If not, let me know, I can send some to your bank accou....ohhhh, you have to have a bank account first...Well, sorry...PayP....ohhhh, you have to be 18 and have a credit card...

I will just send you a Cheque...ohhhh, I don't use cheques anymore, sorry buddy...Wish I could help you :o

---------- Post added at 04:02 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:00 PM ----------

I just think Crysis wants to either...

A. Suck my dick (really)
B. Fuck me wife (sorry, Ex-wife)
C. Wishes he had half the skill as me in life in general
D. Is a fucking closet case
E. All of the above
F.uck you

[Babylon]

Originally Posted by Danjer

I'll pay for your ticket, or mine...You wanna come here, or me go there? I will be in Florida in March 2015...But let me know...I would love to have a nice video of that attempt.

What's mommy making you for dinner? Did she give you money to have fun with your friends today? If not, let me know, I can send some to your bank accou....ohhhh, you have to have a bank account first...Well, sorry...PayP....ohhhh, you have to be 18 and have a credit card...

I will just send you a Cheque...ohhhh, I don't use cheques anymore, sorry buddy...Wish I could help you :o

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I just think Crysis wants to either...

A. Suck my dick (really)
B. Fuck me wife (sorry, Ex-wife)
C. Wishes he had half the skill as me in life in general
D. Is a fucking closet case
E. All of the above
F.uck you

Lol at you having to specify "in life in general" because you know I'm better than you here. Your life means nothing, within the confides of this website your life doesn't exist. You're just another username on this website making trash music and getting salty when people call you out on your ass-ness. You sound like a mixture of bnas and maze but have the lyrical content of Mokane, leave this site.

You're terrible, honestly so god-awful that it makes me cringe that I even have to tell you that you're this bad. It should just be a pre-requisite to listening to your tracks. Please start posting big warning labels at least telling people that they're about to listen to 18 seconds of off-beat one syllable garbage played off as an album snippet. Don't believe you're this bad? Let's set up a battle and have some stipulations you garbage ass pussy.

Now go ahead and reply with random capital letters about how you can't battle me you clueless, talentless little faggot.

[Babylon]

Originally Posted by Danjer

I'll pay for your ticket, or mine...You wanna come here, or me go there? I will be in Florida in March 2015...But let me know...I would love to have a nice video of that attempt.

What's mommy making you for dinner? Did she give you money to have fun with your friends today? If not, let me know, I can send some to your bank accou....ohhhh, you have to have a bank account first...Well, sorry...PayP....ohhhh, you have to be 18 and have a credit card...

I will just send you a Cheque...ohhhh, I don't use cheques anymore, sorry buddy...Wish I could help you :o

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I just think Crysis wants to either...

A. Suck my dick (really)
B. Fuck me wife (sorry, Ex-wife)
C. Wishes he had half the skill as me in life in general
D. Is a fucking closet case
E. All of the above
F.uck you

Lol at you having to specify "in life in general" because you know I'm better than you here. Your life means nothing, within the confides of this website your life doesn't exist. You're just another username on this website making trash music and getting salty when people call you out on your ass-ness. You sound like a mixture of bnas and maze but have the lyrical content of Mokane, leave this site.

You're terrible, honestly so god-awful that it makes me cringe that I even have to tell you that you're this bad. It should just be a pre-requisite to listening to your tracks. Please start posting big warning labels at least telling people that they're about to listen to 18 seconds of off-beat one syllable garbage played off as an album snippet. Don't believe you're this bad? Let's set up a battle and have some stipulations you garbage ass pussy.

Now go ahead and reply with random capital letters about how you can't battle me you clueless, talentless little faggot.