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How to Improve my wording ?
This is my major problem while writing verses. I always get people telling me the wording was terrible and shit. How to improve it ? Serious answers, don't troll.
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07-18-2012, 07:33 PM
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How to Improve my wording ?
This is my major problem while writing verses. I always get people telling me the wording was terrible and shit. How to improve it ? Serious answers, don't troll.
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07-18-2012, 07:36 PM
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Say shit that makes sense...don't force it
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07-18-2012, 07:36 PM
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Say shit that makes sense...don't force it
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07-18-2012, 07:37 PM
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Write sentences. Don't force it to make a multi work. It should come off natural.
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07-18-2012, 07:37 PM
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Write sentences. Don't force it to make a multi work. It should come off natural.
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07-18-2012, 07:42 PM
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Thanks for the advices. I'll work on that.
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07-18-2012, 07:42 PM
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Thanks for the advices. I'll work on that.
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LOL @ Black-Book giving advice on wording, though.
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07-18-2012, 07:42 PM
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LOL @ Black-Book giving advice on wording, though.
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07-18-2012, 07:44 PM
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My wording use to be terrible. I'll admit to that. Check my battle from last round of the tournament though. It's much improved...
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07-18-2012, 07:44 PM
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My wording use to be terrible. I'll admit to that. Check my battle from last round of the tournament though. It's much improved...
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07-18-2012, 07:48 PM
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Post up 1 of your battles and I'll help you out.
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07-18-2012, 07:48 PM
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Post up 1 of your battles and I'll help you out.
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07-18-2012, 07:52 PM
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In this battle, I have some fucked up multis which caused me to lose it lol.
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=441201
@ BLNK You missing something.
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07-18-2012, 07:52 PM
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In this battle, I have some fucked up multis which caused me to lose it lol.
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=441201
@ BLNK You missing something.
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07-18-2012, 08:21 PM
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@ PheoNix , be careful with taking advice on your wording though. Wording can be bad, but it can also be a factor or a tribute to your shit that sets you aside from others and makes you more original. Just don't write shit thats evidently forced (I definitely use to have that problem), make sure to just use common sense.
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i told you stoy was handsome
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07-18-2012, 08:21 PM
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@ PheoNix , be careful with taking advice on your wording though. Wording can be bad, but it can also be a factor or a tribute to your shit that sets you aside from others and makes you more original. Just don't write shit thats evidently forced (I definitely use to have that problem), make sure to just use common sense.
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07-18-2012, 08:23 PM
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Oh aight man. Thanks for telling me that. I guess it just becomes better in time.
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07-18-2012, 08:23 PM
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Oh aight man. Thanks for telling me that. I guess it just becomes better in time.
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