Moses Rap School is a joke

[Godbody]

Don't take this as hate, take it as criticism from one of the greatest text/audio battlers to ever graze the website.

How is the bar of the week

I prolly 'Got him sweating' like he BEEN in A FURNACE- Cuz if I find out he had inTENSIOns TA FLIRT WITH my CHICK, on HER WORK SHIFT. Then Clips'll meet this geek, just to 'sweep him off his feet' like this KID was OBSERVIN a TRICK that WAS GORGEOUS!


First of all, why do you have apostrophes around Got him sweating. There's nothing complicated about those 3 words that calls for apostrophes

and Gorgeous does not rhyme with anything

If someone's getting bar of the week for rhyming Furnace with Gorgeous I'm gonna start fuckin rhymin Bumble bee with race car.

People need to stop writing bars the way THEY read it with THEIR accents and write them in a fashion that everybody can comprehend

[Godbody]

Don't take this as hate, take it as criticism from one of the greatest text/audio battlers to ever graze the website.

How is the bar of the week

I prolly 'Got him sweating' like he BEEN in A FURNACE- Cuz if I find out he had inTENSIOns TA FLIRT WITH my CHICK, on HER WORK SHIFT. Then Clips'll meet this geek, just to 'sweep him off his feet' like this KID was OBSERVIN a TRICK that WAS GORGEOUS!


First of all, why do you have apostrophes around Got him sweating. There's nothing complicated about those 3 words that calls for apostrophes

and Gorgeous does not rhyme with anything

If someone's getting bar of the week for rhyming Furnace with Gorgeous I'm gonna start fuckin rhymin Bumble bee with race car.

People need to stop writing bars the way THEY read it with THEIR accents and write them in a fashion that everybody can comprehend

What are you contributing?

What are you contributing?

[Godbody]

What am I contributing? The necessary feedback & criticism for you keyboard warriors to become great keyboard warriors and not sub-par ones

There's a right way to do things and then there's your way. & Your way isn't always right. In this case, @JimmyDean 's bar was horrible and for it to get bar of the week removes any credibility from Moses' lil "rap school" and whoever these horrendous judges are that pick out the bar of the week. If it isn't just @Moses himself

and I contribute some of the best audio battles this site has seen and will ever see

[Godbody]

What am I contributing? The necessary feedback & criticism for you keyboard warriors to become great keyboard warriors and not sub-par ones

There's a right way to do things and then there's your way. & Your way isn't always right. In this case, @JimmyDean 's bar was horrible and for it to get bar of the week removes any credibility from Moses' lil "rap school" and whoever these horrendous judges are that pick out the bar of the week. If it isn't just @Moses himself

and I contribute some of the best audio battles this site has seen and will ever see

[TiG-Z]

I disagree and agree about certain things to do with the school but I def agree on this. I did not find the example bars for week one helpful and they def weren't any good in my opinion.

No hate, just opinion

[TiG-Z]

I disagree and agree about certain things to do with the school but I def agree on this. I did not find the example bars for week one helpful and they def weren't any good in my opinion.

No hate, just opinion

[V3numb]

maybe cause his bar was just better than the rest.. somone has to shine within a group,, may not have been his best bar.. but least he was on top of the rest tho

[V3numb]

maybe cause his bar was just better than the rest.. somone has to shine within a group,, may not have been his best bar.. but least he was on top of the rest tho

Originally Posted by Godbody

What am I contributing? The necessary feedback & criticism for you keyboard warriors to become great keyboard warriors and not sub-par ones

So do it, maybe I have missed where ever it is you're doing this but I haven't received any feedback from you. I would welcome it, I myself am aware of a multitude of faults within my own verses that I'm working on so I'm sure you could pick out a ton.

My point was that criticism of those that make an attempt to help whilst making no such attempt yourself is non-productive.

---------- Post added at 12:36 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:34 PM ----------

Originally Posted by TiG-Z

I disagree and agree about certain things to do with the school but I def agree on this. I did not find the example bars for week one helpful and they def weren't any good in my opinion.

No hate, just opinion

This was the expo you left on one of my battles earlier today:

"My wins line connected really well, both were good! Mine was structured better in my opinion and flowed better! But I enjoyed reading both! Good battle Fv
Voted: Subreal: 5 / Nicholas: 4
Posted on: 2013-08-04 15:07:23 "

Unless you're SubReal then your expo didn't even make sense, it's ironic you commented on structure and flow when you couldn't even word your vote correctly. Don't be a hypocrite.

Originally Posted by Godbody

What am I contributing? The necessary feedback & criticism for you keyboard warriors to become great keyboard warriors and not sub-par ones

So do it, maybe I have missed where ever it is you're doing this but I haven't received any feedback from you. I would welcome it, I myself am aware of a multitude of faults within my own verses that I'm working on so I'm sure you could pick out a ton.

My point was that criticism of those that make an attempt to help whilst making no such attempt yourself is non-productive.

---------- Post added at 12:36 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:34 PM ----------

Originally Posted by TiG-Z

I disagree and agree about certain things to do with the school but I def agree on this. I did not find the example bars for week one helpful and they def weren't any good in my opinion.

No hate, just opinion

This was the expo you left on one of my battles earlier today:

"My wins line connected really well, both were good! Mine was structured better in my opinion and flowed better! But I enjoyed reading both! Good battle Fv
Voted: Subreal: 5 / Nicholas: 4
Posted on: 2013-08-04 15:07:23 "

Unless you're SubReal then your expo didn't even make sense, it's ironic you commented on structure and flow when you couldn't even word your vote correctly. Don't be a hypocrite.

[Godbody]

Make no attempts myself? I dont even fuck with the text battlin like that

But I didn't forget how to text battle. & That bar from @JimmyDean was horrendous. The beginning was dope, I saw where it was going and initially the rhyme scheme was on point

But how are you going to host a "rap school" and give someone bar of the week when they're not even rhyming. If this is really a "rap school" and Moses is really trying to help people elevate, then he should have brought it to Jimmy's attention immediately that the last rhyme was forced up the fuckin ass

I'd take a bar that executes the assignment half-assedly if it rhymes and reads fluidly over that JimmyDean bar

[Godbody]

Make no attempts myself? I dont even fuck with the text battlin like that

But I didn't forget how to text battle. & That bar from @JimmyDean was horrendous. The beginning was dope, I saw where it was going and initially the rhyme scheme was on point

But how are you going to host a "rap school" and give someone bar of the week when they're not even rhyming. If this is really a "rap school" and Moses is really trying to help people elevate, then he should have brought it to Jimmy's attention immediately that the last rhyme was forced up the fuckin ass

I'd take a bar that executes the assignment half-assedly if it rhymes and reads fluidly over that JimmyDean bar

Originally Posted by Godbody

Make no attempts myself? I dont even fuck with the text battlin like that

But I didn't forget how to text battle. & That bar from @JimmyDean was horrendous. The beginning was dope, I saw where it was going and initially the rhyme scheme was on point

But how are you going to host a "rap school" and give someone bar of the week when they're not even rhyming. If this is really a "rap school" and Moses is really trying to help people elevate, then he should have brought it to Jimmy's attention immediately that the last rhyme was forced up the fuckin ass

I'd take a bar that executes the assignment half-assedly if it rhymes and reads fluidly over that JimmyDean bar

So your first reply to my comment was a lie, you're making no attempt to help. Therefore you really have no grounds to criticize someone that is. Rather than being so critical of others why don't you form your own school, if your advice is that superior I'm sure you will do just fine.

Originally Posted by Godbody

Make no attempts myself? I dont even fuck with the text battlin like that

But I didn't forget how to text battle. & That bar from @JimmyDean was horrendous. The beginning was dope, I saw where it was going and initially the rhyme scheme was on point

But how are you going to host a "rap school" and give someone bar of the week when they're not even rhyming. If this is really a "rap school" and Moses is really trying to help people elevate, then he should have brought it to Jimmy's attention immediately that the last rhyme was forced up the fuckin ass

I'd take a bar that executes the assignment half-assedly if it rhymes and reads fluidly over that JimmyDean bar

So your first reply to my comment was a lie, you're making no attempt to help. Therefore you really have no grounds to criticize someone that is. Rather than being so critical of others why don't you form your own school, if your advice is that superior I'm sure you will do just fine.

[X-Calibur]

Think someone needs a timeout .....

[X-Calibur]

Think someone needs a timeout .....

[Phracture]

lmaoo at "greatest text/audio battlers to ever graze the website" ... j/k

but on the reall

Crying when his hats arent FITTING ON HIS PRETZEL HEAD..the words "You were born special" stuck-in-his-brain from one-of-da-days he got a VISIT FROM PROFESSOR X' - Godbody

FITTING ON and VISIT FROM don't rhyme ...
PRETZEL HEAD and PROFESSOR X don't rhyme ...

don't go around spew'n nonsense when you do the same shit you tryna criticize someone else about bro it's not cool at all ...

and this is no hate on you or your craft but don't hate and not help

[Phracture]

lmaoo at "greatest text/audio battlers to ever graze the website" ... j/k

but on the reall

Crying when his hats arent FITTING ON HIS PRETZEL HEAD..the words "You were born special" stuck-in-his-brain from one-of-da-days he got a VISIT FROM PROFESSOR X' - Godbody

FITTING ON and VISIT FROM don't rhyme ...
PRETZEL HEAD and PROFESSOR X don't rhyme ...

don't go around spew'n nonsense when you do the same shit you tryna criticize someone else about bro it's not cool at all ...

and this is no hate on you or your craft but don't hate and not help