Structure

[Liquid Wolf]

you guys are really hard on this like wtf


bum ass nigga do you STILL SHOWER? he's a "let me use your bathroom guy" He STEAL SHOWERS!!/ but i'll wet him up with the metal STEEL SHOWERS!!!!


is that standard or do I need another /


seriously what is it?

just read op sober shit looks like a troll post

but no matter what structure it seems like its never enough
guess i'll just have to copy some text legend's structure style

and add my own bars shit is crazy that nobody will help

[Liquid Wolf]

you guys are really hard on this like wtf


bum ass nigga do you STILL SHOWER? he's a "let me use your bathroom guy" He STEAL SHOWERS!!/ but i'll wet him up with the metal STEEL SHOWERS!!!!


is that standard or do I need another /


seriously what is it?

just read op sober shit looks like a troll post

but no matter what structure it seems like its never enough
guess i'll just have to copy some text legend's structure style

and add my own bars shit is crazy that nobody will help

[Obey]

It's not original man, think outside of the box If you call me a ''let me use your bathroom guy.'' in a battle I'm going to drop the microphone, squeeze a hot shit onto the microphone and then win the battle. You need to think better concepts, not to be mean but..

[Obey]

It's not original man, think outside of the box If you call me a ''let me use your bathroom guy.'' in a battle I'm going to drop the microphone, squeeze a hot shit onto the microphone and then win the battle. You need to think better concepts, not to be mean but..

[Liquid Wolf]

Originally Posted by Obey

It's not original man, think outside of the box If you call me a ''let me use your bathroom guy.'' in a battle I'm going to drop the microphone, squeeze a hot shit onto the microphone and then win the battle. You need to think better concepts, not to be mean but..

im not gonna waste good material for an example obviously..

I got bars and concepts
I need to know how to properly structure them though

lb structure is so weird if you went to another site
with it you'd get crucified

any other site its structured in bar form

like this it looks neater and flows smoother

See Dizaster in Philly I was on blocks a lot
Hustling on corners selling pot and rocks a lot
Until niggas started hating dialing the cops a lot
Im not fucking Canabis but yall know though
Only thing Cass will pull out in a battle is a .44
Tell that goofy ass nigga Lush to have Cass check
I been ripping niggas since the days of Cassettes
Diz an angry bitch screaming cuz she on the cycle
Cass give straight bars get yo trash ass recycled

The Hustler

[Liquid Wolf]

Originally Posted by Obey

It's not original man, think outside of the box If you call me a ''let me use your bathroom guy.'' in a battle I'm going to drop the microphone, squeeze a hot shit onto the microphone and then win the battle. You need to think better concepts, not to be mean but..

im not gonna waste good material for an example obviously..

I got bars and concepts
I need to know how to properly structure them though

lb structure is so weird if you went to another site
with it you'd get crucified

any other site its structured in bar form

like this it looks neater and flows smoother

See Dizaster in Philly I was on blocks a lot
Hustling on corners selling pot and rocks a lot
Until niggas started hating dialing the cops a lot
Im not fucking Canabis but yall know though
Only thing Cass will pull out in a battle is a .44
Tell that goofy ass nigga Lush to have Cass check
I been ripping niggas since the days of Cassettes
Diz an angry bitch screaming cuz she on the cycle
Cass give straight bars get yo trash ass recycled

The Hustler

[Obey]

There's no ''official'' way to structure it though. Just keep the space between your multis short, keep it readable and flowing nicely and you'll be straight. Also up the originality.

[Obey]

There's no ''official'' way to structure it though. Just keep the space between your multis short, keep it readable and flowing nicely and you'll be straight. Also up the originality.