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Unread 03-17-2014, 10:45 AM
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Default Ace Hood - Caught

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Default Ace Hood - Caught

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Most of this is real nice..only thing I am not feeling is the left side of the font...CAUGHT ... to keep with the flow and theme it would have been better to just have kept the color scheme Orange and yellow.... the Ace Hood colors are hard to read....
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Most of this is real nice..only thing I am not feeling is the left side of the font...CAUGHT ... to keep with the flow and theme it would have been better to just have kept the color scheme Orange and yellow.... the Ace Hood colors are hard to read....
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I'm going to be pretty critical of this, but if you're just venturing into covers then it's pretty good.

1. That helicopter. Is it a toy? Why are the cast of Honey I Shrunk The Kids coming out of it? It's cut badly and by all means should be crashing into that wall.

2. Sky lighting wouldnt work with alley lighting.

3. Grafitti perspective is very off.

4. Random non blended guy being arrested.

5. Why is there sunshine on the cop pretending to be an Ape?

6. Chainlink fence on top of car.

7. Bird is bigger than chopper police.

8. Lighting on main character is off.

9. Ace Hood text is bad.



This is all mainly perspective issues, and I was harsh cause that's something you don't need experience to see. On the positives, I really like the Caught text.
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I'm going to be pretty critical of this, but if you're just venturing into covers then it's pretty good.

1. That helicopter. Is it a toy? Why are the cast of Honey I Shrunk The Kids coming out of it? It's cut badly and by all means should be crashing into that wall.

2. Sky lighting wouldnt work with alley lighting.

3. Grafitti perspective is very off.

4. Random non blended guy being arrested.

5. Why is there sunshine on the cop pretending to be an Ape?

6. Chainlink fence on top of car.

7. Bird is bigger than chopper police.

8. Lighting on main character is off.

9. Ace Hood text is bad.



This is all mainly perspective issues, and I was harsh cause that's something you don't need experience to see. On the positives, I really like the Caught text.
 
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Unread 03-18-2014, 02:43 PM
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@InCizion was thinking same bit red/blue lights portray police


@Erebus no stress bro' (btw im not trying to seem arrogant, cause i know i come off as it somtimes as well, but this is just my pov cause im sure i could have done better myself)



1: lol well propotrtionwise they should eb a lot smaller than everyone in front coming as a perspective but ik what u ment

2:? lol lights are coming from the cars and text

3:i was hthinking same but graffiti can be random for the most seeing that they liekt o do 3d and warp the perspective irl as well

4:I agree (i got tunnel vision)

5: yeah forgot to shade that white part (tunenl vision again but thing is shes arresting somone lol.. not just playing with shit)

6:Look all the way twards the right, and you'll see the fence post, what your looking at is a fence wuth a bg behind it, just that parts of the fence is broken up (i agree it was poorly done doe)

&: i was working for a contrast piece so if i brighten him up a bit it woulda been off, agreed i could ahave done better doe

9: agrred


Caught text is so-so.. i distaste it
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@InCizion was thinking same bit red/blue lights portray police


@Erebus no stress bro' (btw im not trying to seem arrogant, cause i know i come off as it somtimes as well, but this is just my pov cause im sure i could have done better myself)



1: lol well propotrtionwise they should eb a lot smaller than everyone in front coming as a perspective but ik what u ment

2:? lol lights are coming from the cars and text

3:i was hthinking same but graffiti can be random for the most seeing that they liekt o do 3d and warp the perspective irl as well

4:I agree (i got tunnel vision)

5: yeah forgot to shade that white part (tunenl vision again but thing is shes arresting somone lol.. not just playing with shit)

6:Look all the way twards the right, and you'll see the fence post, what your looking at is a fence wuth a bg behind it, just that parts of the fence is broken up (i agree it was poorly done doe)

&: i was working for a contrast piece so if i brighten him up a bit it woulda been off, agreed i could ahave done better doe

9: agrred


Caught text is so-so.. i distaste it
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^Still kicks the shitty covers I made's ass.
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^Still kicks the shitty covers I made's ass.
 
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