Fair Votes PLEASE

[Capone Da AyetH]

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=448944


Thank you.

[Capone Da AyetH]

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=448944


Thank you.

[J u s T C]

Your verse is laced with played set up's and punches and is riddled with really poor wording. But with that said. Sway or no sway you shouldn't be losing that battle.

[J u s T C]

Your verse is laced with played set up's and punches and is riddled with really poor wording. But with that said. Sway or no sway you shouldn't be losing that battle.

[Capone Da AyetH]

well thank in a ok way....
the heck u mean by poor wording?

[Capone Da AyetH]

well thank in a ok way....
the heck u mean by poor wording?

[J u s T C]

Well this

"but that 'Kid is Foul' which Ill put 'bats to this Fool' which this"

First off "WHICH ILL put bats to.." in the context of the previous line makes no sense. Plus I'm not sure if you meant WHICH'll or WHICH I'LL. simple grammatical laziness . But either way it doesn't work and It doesn't need to be there because it breaks up the flow of the read since grammatically, it's gibberish. Plus using the words WHICH ILL then a couple words down the line saying WHICH IS completely throws it off. It's not natural as a sentence. It's awkward. Work on making your wording more natural. I was reading some of that verse thinking English wasn't your first language.

[J u s T C]

Well this

"but that 'Kid is Foul' which Ill put 'bats to this Fool' which this"

First off "WHICH ILL put bats to.." in the context of the previous line makes no sense. Plus I'm not sure if you meant WHICH'll or WHICH I'LL. simple grammatical laziness . But either way it doesn't work and It doesn't need to be there because it breaks up the flow of the read since grammatically, it's gibberish. Plus using the words WHICH ILL then a couple words down the line saying WHICH IS completely throws it off. It's not natural as a sentence. It's awkward. Work on making your wording more natural. I was reading some of that verse thinking English wasn't your first language.

[Capone Da AyetH]

<@!~~~ so much Asian ha , but i see what cha saying , thanks

[Capone Da AyetH]

<@!~~~ so much Asian ha , but i see what cha saying , thanks

[Revan]

I can appriecate you feeling annoyed when your losing a battle you feel you should be winning, but do not post thread titles like that again. Swaying IS swaying and is not tolerated.

We have Mods & FVC you could of gone to for votes, theres no need to make threads like this.

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[Revan]

I can appriecate you feeling annoyed when your losing a battle you feel you should be winning, but do not post thread titles like that again. Swaying IS swaying and is not tolerated.

We have Mods & FVC you could of gone to for votes, theres no need to make threads like this.

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[J u s T C]

Yeah. I shouldn't have really said what I did in the first post either tbh. You can delete it if you want @RULE.

Like he said there is an FVC forum you can use to get fair votes. Next time use that or PM a member of staff instead of making threads like these.

[J u s T C]

Yeah. I shouldn't have really said what I did in the first post either tbh. You can delete it if you want @RULE.

Like he said there is an FVC forum you can use to get fair votes. Next time use that or PM a member of staff instead of making threads like these.

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