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Unread 05-07-2012, 09:02 PM
Alter Ego1718
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whats up, new to the site just droppin one of my most recent tracks , on some real shit. let me know what yall think

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11611131
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whats up, new to the site just droppin one of my most recent tracks , on some real shit. let me know what yall think

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Unread 05-08-2012, 11:38 AM
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Pretty nice, fam. One thing I noticed is that your flow gets a little choppy when you have to squeeze extra syllables in. Instead of forcing those out, become familiar with the concept of "triplets" and that should help you roll those fuckers out more smoothly. Aside from that, it's not bad at all.

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Pretty nice, fam. One thing I noticed is that your flow gets a little choppy when you have to squeeze extra syllables in. Instead of forcing those out, become familiar with the concept of "triplets" and that should help you roll those fuckers out more smoothly. Aside from that, it's not bad at all.

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K thx ,,I know a few people said that what do you mean by triplets? Ya I'm tryin only got limited time to fuck wit my music. N I do every part of it except the beat,, anything else?
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K thx ,,I know a few people said that what do you mean by triplets? Ya I'm tryin only got limited time to fuck wit my music. N I do every part of it except the beat,, anything else?
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