Any feedback?

[B U R D E N]

i go thru everyday, going back in everyway but my mind cant quite realize what went wrong
its real slow n filled w/ pain and knowing that im to blame ..im dieing, theres no light just nights so long
i cant do it.. im living thru it all, put the piece down then lite a j
the chant ..DO IT! im giving my all to defeat things around but im feeling like a stray
the home bois r gone.. they split or past, im left like fuck chrome it does nothing but wrong when it fires and blast
my home? no toys or lawn just shit thats trashed and theft ..people just rome n r loving when you r gone or u wake up n tires are slashed!
...........

i typed this up the other night.. wasnt trying that hard tbh but should i keep going? any feedback? also i was just writing.. didnt care about capping anything or if the line was on point i was just typing nah mean. im wonderin if i should add to it. i'd add meta's and all that good shit to make it better.

@Mind Fuck @RULE @NaturIll @Erupt-da-Monsta @Anonyme @Ty McGuire @Verity @2FUEL

[B U R D E N]

i go thru everyday, going back in everyway but my mind cant quite realize what went wrong
its real slow n filled w/ pain and knowing that im to blame ..im dieing, theres no light just nights so long
i cant do it.. im living thru it all, put the piece down then lite a j
the chant ..DO IT! im giving my all to defeat things around but im feeling like a stray
the home bois r gone.. they split or past, im left like fuck chrome it does nothing but wrong when it fires and blast
my home? no toys or lawn just shit thats trashed and theft ..people just rome n r loving when you r gone or u wake up n tires are slashed!
...........

i typed this up the other night.. wasnt trying that hard tbh but should i keep going? any feedback? also i was just writing.. didnt care about capping anything or if the line was on point i was just typing nah mean. im wonderin if i should add to it. i'd add meta's and all that good shit to make it better.

@Mind Fuck @RULE @NaturIll @Erupt-da-Monsta @Anonyme @Ty McGuire @Verity @2FUEL