Ring The Alarm (Ft. Punk & GRizzEAT) - Lets Beef

**AfterThought** · #1 05-23-2013, 06:13 PM

Appreciated.

**AfterThought** · 05-23-2013, 06:13 PM

Appreciated.

**X-Calibur** · #2 05-23-2013, 06:18 PM

Lmao at the start that shit was funny as fuck .....

First verse .... Flow on point good content in the verse quality is good .....

Chorus is it meant to sound like its coming threw a phone call ?

Verse two .... Yeh great quality some nice lyrics too good flow

So who spit what ????

Could of done with a third verse for me ....

Props tho ....

**X-Calibur** · 05-23-2013, 06:18 PM

Lmao at the start that shit was funny as fuck .....

First verse .... Flow on point good content in the verse quality is good .....

Chorus is it meant to sound like its coming threw a phone call ?

Verse two .... Yeh great quality some nice lyrics too good flow

So who spit what ????

Could of done with a third verse for me ....

Props tho ....

**AfterThought** · #3 05-23-2013, 06:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by X-Calibur

Lmao at the start that shit was funny as fuck .....

First verse .... Flow on point good content in the verse quality is good .....

Chorus is it meant to sound like its coming threw a phone call ?

Verse two .... Yeh great quality some nice lyrics too good flow

So who spit what ????

Could of done with a third verse for me ....

Props tho ....

Yeah, chorus is meant to sound like that, and first verse = Grizz, second verse = AT.

**AfterThought** · 05-23-2013, 06:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by X-Calibur

Lmao at the start that shit was funny as fuck .....

First verse .... Flow on point good content in the verse quality is good .....

Chorus is it meant to sound like its coming threw a phone call ?

Verse two .... Yeh great quality some nice lyrics too good flow

So who spit what ????

Could of done with a third verse for me ....

Props tho ....

Yeah, chorus is meant to sound like that, and first verse = Grizz, second verse = AT.

**X-Calibur** · #4 05-23-2013, 06:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AfterThought

Yeah, chorus is meant to sound like that, and first verse = Grizz, second verse = AT.

Ooo ight ma dude i rated it a 9 as i wasnt a fannof the chorus but when i went to rate it gave it a 0 if ya can delete it ill re-rate it for ya ....

Shit was good tho no doubt ... Props

**X-Calibur** · 05-23-2013, 06:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AfterThought

Yeah, chorus is meant to sound like that, and first verse = Grizz, second verse = AT.

Ooo ight ma dude i rated it a 9 as i wasnt a fannof the chorus but when i went to rate it gave it a 0 if ya can delete it ill re-rate it for ya ....

Shit was good tho no doubt ... Props

Phonocide · #5 05-24-2013, 05:10 AM

Good shit, AT. That track is dirrrty, fam. I'm not really feelin' the chorus too much either, but the beat is nice, and both verses were right on point, dope as fuck. I think the chorus could be made to work with some better production, but as it stands, I feel it isn't helpin' the quality of the rest of the track.

Respect,
'Preme

Phonocide · 05-24-2013, 05:10 AM

Good shit, AT. That track is dirrrty, fam. I'm not really feelin' the chorus too much either, but the beat is nice, and both verses were right on point, dope as fuck. I think the chorus could be made to work with some better production, but as it stands, I feel it isn't helpin' the quality of the rest of the track.

Respect,
'Preme