kk cool cuz, ill hit you up wiv a verse in a bit, join my crew dawg

one of my best, a classic for sure
http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...086&section=tb

Send 8 dude .

its cool , I didnt put much work into that verse , I deserve what I got , Thx anyway

why'd you say "hmm" on my battle??

Check out the first cypher of my new cypher series The Revolution

Intro (freestyle)
http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...on=tb&id=55567

Feedback would be appreciated!

8 grade? That's cool : p ... Are you from where it really says lol?

lol yeah i'm really smart but SO BAD when it comes to tests and stuff.. I like choke at the moment smh.. I'm only a sophmore myself, I saw you saying you were young as well

You may have lost but don't feel down.. continue to elevate and stay up dude.. good luck on those exams you were mentioning too lol

No worries mate!

There's nothin' wrong wi' shootin etc of it's done in an interestin way but you've ya whole imagination to use to kill someone so why not go to town! As long as it makes sense to the reader!

I heard you had exams all the best wi em mate!

Cheers!

Cheers mate!

Keep practicin and ask people on where you can improve then go away and practice what they've said!

There's no Hip Hop scene where I live so studied h
Rap tracks, listenin to how they rhyme and flow, then I wrote and wrote and wrote! I've a box of pads wi lyrics on! Even if it's one line I wrote it and never scribbled anythin out as it might work somewhere else!

Think of an unusual way of sayin' summit.

In a battle u can kill your opponent in anyway you like so you don't have to shoot or stab 'em

eg. The last line in our battle I said I broke the bath in the Bates Motel so you had to use the shower. In the film Psycho a woman gets stabbed to death in the shower whilst at the Bates Motel so I wa sayin I gave you no choice but to get killed in the shower. It's a famous scene so hopefully people got it.

Keep practicin and chase up every low score to get feedback!

Cheers!

I appreciate that thanks! 4 and 5s do seem low but like I said it's all subjective!

On the flip side of it I was voted 10 before and thought that wa high for the verse
I dropped!

You've made me feel very old, readin ya verse I'd have had you down as older! I wish I could've rapped as good as you at 13! I certainly wouldn't worry about the votes then!

This site's full of experienced rappers so don't be afraid to ask them for advice! I have, just grow some thick skin to take any criticism and listen to what they say and if you don't understand ask em to explain!

Remember, nothing's personal on the site. People don't know you and all they have on you is a rap verse so that is all they're commenting on!

Don't get downbeat, keep writin, listening to advice and learn as much as you can at school as that's where the clever lines comes from (not from just listening to rap) and you my friend will be unstoppable as you're already pretty damn good

Cheers!

Don't put yourself down! I think people may have voted low as its a tourney but havin said that the voting system is totally down to the user eg. One man's 4 is another man's 8!

They have voted low but don't take it to heart, why not ask some of em nicely to give ya a bit more clarity on why they voted as to get some feedback.

I always try and grab as much feedback as I can as that's how I can improve.

Don't put yourself down you came back wi a hard verse that impressed me first time and you've really improved! I'm limited to what advice I can give as I'm still learning but i'd cause what feedback you can get!

Good work and good battle!

http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...on=tb&id=55477
new cypher

Re-send the verse to your opponent and he will reply with what he wrote. Just a glitch in the system.

My bad! I got two tourneys mixed up! Sorry!

Alright and don't listen to the others. You have until November 18th at 12 midnight to post. Clearly stated in the forum.

Only one day to drop a reply in the tourney!

Go for if mate!

Don't forget to reply to Spaggy's eight line verse. Good luck.