thats exactly what i thought haha

Yeah I hear that, sometimes I get serious writer's block on a pic because nothing about it seems interesting. I guess when I said you could do a lot more with that pic, I meant it, but now that I think about it, the whole zombie thing has been beaten to death lately on TV and in movies, so it is kind of hard to be original with a pic like that.

ya of course i actually found that picture hard to work with honestly

Yeah np, and you got the right idea man, just spend more time on thinking of ways to separate your story from stuff people have already heard, that's what wins topicals. Ya gotta make the events and descriptions thought provoking nah mean?

Props for the critques on the inkwell ppv im trying to step my topical game up good looks fam