DPS. Posted on: 2011-11-04 00:29:23

GOOD LUCK GUYS......GOOD TO SEE ASKARI IN THIS TOURNEY....A REAL WILDCARD haha Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-03 14:41:50

DPS!! . Posted on: 2011-11-03 15:59:08

Posted, g'luck RED. Always 100. Posted on: 2011-11-04 06:26:43

DP$$$$$$$$ Posted on: 2011-11-04 07:36:08

LAS1 Posted on: 2011-11-05 12:49:47

it looked like a had *3 lines left when i Really Had like *6 it was strange Posted on: 2011-11-06 15:12:05

!!DPS!! Posted on: 2011-11-06 16:11:45

wow great battle-fairs in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-06 17:29:23

A GOOD READ, ASKARI CAME WIT SOME CLEVER SHIT (i do like his nameplays lol) A FEW OF THA WORDPLAYS WERE A LIL 'MEH' BUT YOU DEFINATELY GOT YA SHIT ON LOCK....RED HAD A SOME GOOD MOMENTS IN HIS VERSE BUT THA FLOW AND RHYMIN WOZ QUITE CHOPPY IN PLACES BUT YOU HAD ME ROLLIN IN A FEW PARTS....I THINK ALL IN ALL ONE WOZ WAY MORE CONSISTANT FROM START TO FINISH AND HIT SOME CONCEPTS WHICH BLEW HIS OPPONANT AWAY....FAIR VOTE IS IN....holla Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-06 17:41:18

hot battle, one got this tho Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-06 18:38:40

fv is in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-06 18:55:07

LAS1 Posted on: 2011-11-06 20:26:11

decent spar brodys...on edged wit harder hittin lines fv dropped Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-07 02:06:31

Nice spar fellas, one opened my eyes to them, real talk. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-07 05:16:46

Other than a couple wordplay issues, one took it with the fresher concepts and punches. Voted Fair. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-07 08:49:56

both was real nice.one had some fresher concepts Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-07 11:00:30

dieee Posted on: 2011-11-07 13:58:20

thought one just out did the other. no hate FV mid to low Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-07 19:49:09

Fair. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-07 20:39:21

Askari: Besides a weirdness in a few of ya rhymes (Cuz of my fucked up accent.. it seems to be the general concensus these days lol) The red riding hood w/p/n/p line was cool. Especially since you set it up nicely enough. it hit..."this is NOT CONTEST!" People don't speak like that Askari it should be "This is NO CONTEST" or "This is NOT A CONTEST" Gotta call you out for sloppy wording just to make it rhyme with your set up and punch.. The set up and the punch was nice to a degree I got the idea behind it. Hot/ burning ember...Con/Burgling members. Sept/ the month aspect of the theme. It wasn't exicuted that great. the idea was creative but the wording and the whole burning embers while burgling members doesn't sit well with me. do people really do that shit? So conceptually it's a big stretch and a force. You burgle someones house u steal they're shit, u not burning embers. lol. u get what i mean? thats the stretch. nice idea though.... meh @ waist/waste and plain/plane w.p's. the Sky dive w/p was cool. belt of bread holsterin toast, who carrys a belt of bread askari? c'mon. i see what u did but again it's a forced concept. people make up silly shit sometimes and think it works. I know writing is about being creative and thinking outside the box. and thats cool. but you have to draw the line somewhere. "'guy's-just-a-pain' and still not 'CLOSE TO WIN, DOE'"..People don't say CLOSE TO WINDOW. they say CLOSE TO A WINDOW or CLOSE TO THE WINDOW. or CLOSE TO WINDOW'S You worded that on some Lizman shit. It's like some Indian chief or cave man speak.. I hate to sound like I'm nit picking but unless ya shit's straight the flaws take over and it fucks it up for me as a reader/voter. I just can't get passed that shit. it bugs me and people don't point these things out, gass people up and let it slide. Trust me if ya shits worded right and it's bang on point I'd say. Ice a dude was meh. for me. I thought the self/cell w/p didn't work at first but it actually does if u pronounce it a certain way u can get away with out using the hard F and the hillbilly phone calls line is ya best line so far. lol. good shit..textin line was nice . Rafiki line. even though it's along the same line as Reefers Pocahontis line in terms of the character refrence being MAAAAAAAAD old. it was alot better than his. It was a aight cheeky lil slick jab and u made it work. it had the desired effect. wasn't feeling the salt sandwiches vinegar line at all simply cause the last thing i associate a sandwhich with is Vinegar..maybe chips but when u say that shit i picture someone putting vinegar on a fucking sandwich lol. nobody does that shit and if they do it's a first to me. So yeah it's a huge stretch for me personally and 1 I can't get passed. there's another aspect to it i wasn't feeling, the wording for the set up around assault but I can't be fucked breaking it down tbh........ This expo's taking for fucking ever and i still gotta break down Barons yet . lmao. this why I can't be fucked voting on battles alot of the time... meh wasn't feeling the closer. it's that whole bread of belt thing again...... Barron...Took 4 lines to get to a name play punch. the n/p punch it self was cool but the set up and taking 4 lines to get to it is unforgivable. Did I miss something in those 4 lines leading up to ASK ARI? o.0.. Line 2 was you nicknaming him dickless ass carry for the 'dick-less' ASKARI part?....Anywhooooo. ..... Yeah Ask Ari n/p on line 4 was cool just the set up was sloppy......""HANDS THEM A SET!!" this KOTEX doesn't KNOW-TECHS; known by his vital signs tho; to SHOW STRESS; while I ROPE-HIS-NECK like the WILD-WILD-WEST!! this FOOL 'BELIEVES" his "TEXT-IS-BEST"!; NO, KILLA ...less chance of that, than RULE and GrizzEAT performing VET-LESS-SEX!!"" WHAT?!?!...WTF?!?! and why are you using quotations on everything in those bars? *LOOKS LOST*.......Entourag e line is by far the best so far..Singers falling from terraces line... Ummm no.. Agin . did a bunch of singers recently jump of a terrace that i don't know about? was this on news at ten? was it in the The Mirror this morning?... Stop forcing concepts. it's pisses me off. it's not clever... if anything it makes u look like ur suffering from writers block cause u can't come up with anything more solid. If any singers did recently just recently "jump from a TERRACE" I give my sincere condolences to there loved 1's. May they RIP and I would also apologize to you Barron in advance of discovering for myself of this SHOCKING TRAGEDY for doubting your line....Moving on.....Confused at the beckham line. being a football mad brit and avid hater of his former club man united ur set up line connection to the punch makes absolutely no fucking sense to me. didn't get the refrence. And me of all people should so if def doesn't make sense..You baisically said some random shit then put "Like Beckhams kicks" at the end.""CLEANED OFF like WET-HANDS AFTER THE PISS!!"" .................... pause............... ........ possesing cigs line was weak but atleast there was a set up there and it made sense......"I display the scalps of my victims "in my closet" like ROGER COLLECTING WIGS!!!!" this line is by far your best line. But I'm sure i've seen this somehwere before. It's ringing alarm bells but I can't pin it. not saying u bit. but as soon as i read this I got de ja vu. I'll Give u the benefit of the doubt. if this is your line shit was nice and i apologize for putting that out there. well played........... My vote goes to the 1 who was more consistant. Votes in V/............ Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-07 23:28:56

Vitty's votey. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-08 06:41:38

one was all around better imo Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-08 16:21:06

Consistency and flow took this one for me...Decent shit here tho...NO H8!!!!! FV FA SHO!!!!!!! Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2011-11-09 04:54:52