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2023 Text Grand Championship
Length: 16 Lines

DeathstroSmoke (37%) Lost

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Reppin: Fayetteville N.C, USA

Shodan (63%) Won

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DeathstroSmoke

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<div>Im predisposed to damage foes and those who oppose with weak flows. Now yall gotta witness a "<em><strong>murder on line"</strong></em> (online) like a group of crows resting beside utility poles. This is retrobution, close range with mosburg. Ill take off your head  publicly, like a medevial execution. Lyrically you cant fuck with me.. and this'll be your "<em><strong>shocking discover</strong></em> "like Ben Franklin's electrocution . Ive had guns that belonged in Miltary surplus catologs, i know that sound "<em><strong>far fetch"</strong></em>, like superman playing with his dog. But when i grab techs, ill make you eligible for a wheelchair thats analog. You've beaten me once, only logical you think you can do it again. But this is when  overconfidence becomes your cardinal sin. In your ryhmes You a fucking cosplay gangsta, you play the role of 6 yr old. Cause whoever you try to "<em><strong>make believe", they know its for pretend.</strong> Your bars are Dr seuss worthy !</em>. Its Ironic you got a track<em><strong> named Sam I am,Because I am Sam. Because im the one with the retarded pen/Penn.</strong></em> You ever been on the run, avioding police detection ? You probbaly never shot a gun,if <em><strong>this pussy discharge.. Its a yeast infection!</strong></em> Ill gun butt you until you have a 1930's broker recollection,of the <em><strong>s</strong><strong>tock crashing in your head giving new meaning to great depression. </strong></em></div>

Shodan

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<div>I doubt that YOU COULD LEARN TO BRING anything like a FLUENT VERSE OR SCHEME! I could school you and we still wouldn't see "YOU-IN-A-VERSE-AT-EASE!!" You might have tried to freestyle but every ONE'S BEEN SHITTY. I hear that shit and I'm like "FUCK-EN KILL ME". Only thing that's "Dirty with Smoke coming off the top" is an UNSWEPT CHIMNEY!! He's in a situation that he should KNOW IS DIRE because I'm shooting machine guns in his direction to CROAK THIS LIAR and he can't escape the bullets (why?) because where there's SMOKE THERE'S FIRE!! It's clear this DUDE'S AIN'T A GREAT, every bar is old-hat, every concept YOU MAKE IS PLAYED, the only time that "something fresh comes off Smoke" is FRUIT FLAVORED VAPE!! I heard you have guns you think can scare me. But those GLOCKS YOU BRING AREN'T, ACTUALLY.  Because "Smoke equipment couldn't be scary" even with FOG MACHINES ON HALLOWEEN!! YOU'RE WORTHLESS and you won't come close to winning here - that's FOR CERTAIN. The only time we see "Smoke blowing up when it comes down to the wire" is a SHORT CIRCUIT!! He thought he could beat me, but this fight against SHO'S A HOPELESS CHANCE, "Smoke will be going off the rails here" with a LOCOMOTIVE CRASH!! </div>

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2023-08-25 23:57:58).

Óðinn <....> The PLK Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	Welcome to Round One of the 2023 Text Grand Championship Tournament. You have until the 25th @ 11:59pm to submit your bars. Late entries will be DQ'ed... Best of luck. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2023-08-21 20:14:30
Phroxen <LoD> Hall Of Famer I am Him 2x Grand Champion One Bar Legend Cypher Champion Scheme Champion Concept Champion One Bar Champion	Somewhat close, however, I think this was effective simplicity v. ineffective simplicity. There were good things in both verses, but also flaws in both verses.. I disliked one's flaws more than the other. Fair's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2023-08-26 08:10:04
DeadTRI <KILLERS.> Moderator Summer Champion	Good show from both here gonna keep it short but one was simply the better puncher FV Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2023-08-26 10:17:54
Óðinn <....> The PLK Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	Decent bout here. Both had some issues, my winner was more consistent throughout. Fairs in, lads. Best of luck. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2023-08-27 12:28:17

MC Negan	One had decent flow and some creativity buti felt the other had flow and harder punches with constant name flips that were pretty well done so i got my winner based on that reason so fair vote is tossed and GL to both mcs. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2023-08-26 00:30:58
BARGER	D.Smoke had a few bars in there with a decent finish however Shodan had a bunch of name flips and good word play to match it with going more direct also.. looks like im not able to vote but id give it to Sho Posted on: 2023-08-26 06:22:36
Masked-Reaper <Chapter666> Grand Champion 2x Premier League Champion Cypher Champion Scheme Champion The Demon	Lot of nameplays from one, more generic punches from the other. Had my winner on first read. GL both Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2023-08-26 10:48:33
Student Staff Hall of Famer LB Historian LetsBeef Patriarch Creative Genius	DeathstroSmoke: Overall a solid drop here, liked the concepts & flow, they tied together nicely, your style isn't typical LB but you make it work. Critique is you fell off towards the end, you had filler throughout too, you made it rhyme which helped your flow but didn't add much to your punch, there's a fine line between those. Shodan: Really liked your drop here overall. Structure & name play really stood out here. Punches were consistently throughout too. Some missteps in your setups that didn't relate / add to your ending punches but enough to take the W here. Overall: Deathstro had some really original concepts but didn't go that personal and lacked execution, Shodan stuck to nameplay but kept it consistent with punches. Going with Shodan on this one, both of y'all brought heat to the table though, honestly could go either way depending on the style preference, props y'all & keep elevating! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2023-08-26 19:15:50
ThaGauddyGawd <TGMXCFC> Premium Member Live Battler	One to me had better bunches and flows while the other had multis and personals. Winner Decided FVNH. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2023-08-27 12:19:18
Esso LBT Legend Concept Champion Tag Team Champion	Shodan beat the nameplay to death...some good, some meh. Where there's smoke bar was nice. Well written despite the lack of variety punch wise. Smoke had some good ideas but the wording and flow needs help. Try being more concise and rhyming more often Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2023-08-27 17:27:47

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