Welcome to 2023's One Bar Championship. You both have three days to wrire and submit your One Bar. Your One Bar must not exceed 220 characters. If it does, you will be DQ'ed. 

Best of luck gentlemen. 

Student , it was a clever angle and u made it work but i feel it was a bit lite for your standards in terms of punch power maybe u underestimated HBG here idk HGB matched student well here and came off a lil more direct for me but this is fookin close one lads FV is here 

Good luck & battle HB!

Expo: Beauty & The Beast

2.4 3.1

Expo: a student= an A STUDENT meaning a student who does extremely well

HIGH GRADE high grades in school/ high grade marajuana

PUPIL also means student and eyes have PUPILS that DILATE in darkness hence telling him not to get any bright ideas in order not to DIE LATE... just be punctual we dont have to see eye to eye.

GL to you as well Student

added expo: and to catch a body is to kill someone, smoking someone is killing them...

The fair goes to, in my opoinion, the one who came proper with there structure.  There scheme stayed on point the whole bar.  Making the set ups easily translate into there punches.  There multies seemed a bit better too.  No hate on the fair, just all respect!

Man this is hard to vote both manz was on their A game init, one had dat creative verse the other followed a decent scheme but i got one edging it i felt the punches were a bit more clearer so fair vote and gl to both.

I got Beast winning. Felt his punch was a bit more put together in a cleaner fashion than Stu's was here and I thought it was a bit better written overall.

Ok lets have a gander - Stuey the build was off for me. Random references to a subject dont make it a good build. its a bit of a mess. The actual punch concept (disney+ profile picture i assume?) with belle in a circle was nice enough but terrible build for me. Hung i have similar issues with your bar too. I think overall though the wording was a lil stronger and wordplay worked for me. But like Stuey tighten up that build. Its not there just to fill space, make it useful and impactful. Fairs in. 1/

Longer Expo: Hung Up=Falling in love / his name is Hung-reedy Beast, In "Beauty & The Beast" he's a Prince 🫅 at the beginning (LIVING SWELL) until he gets cursed by a Witch (SPIRIT FELL) fleeced = getting turned into a giant furry beast / getting robbed, Disney+ is where "Beauty & The Beast" lives, Ring his Belle = knock him out / steal Belle from him & marry her myself

Student: Simple set up , stayed relevant to ur end punch.  Flowed well enough. Beast/Belle is kinda played tho, this had a slightly different twist 

Beast: Internal rhyme scheme, first part of the bar was kinda filler.  Die-Late/Dialate... but of a stretch but the set up was decent with the bright idea part 

overall both bought decent bars. Fair vote in. 

Good spar here guys. I got my winner on set up relevancy and consistent rhyming. Both concepts were solid. Could see this going either way.

Felt one had the cleaner hit the other had a nice concept but it wasn't done fresh imo 

Student: This is probably the best bar I've ever seen from you. Cleanly executed and lands a solid hit. I thought the bar had a good progression to it, almost like you were telling a story. "Ring his bell(e)" was a strong concept, although I do think that ring/marry (using ring as a verb) is a reach, but not a bad one. The rhyming here was simple but very well done. Biggest flaw here is that you didn't say anything about his belle/girl until you got to the end; if you had done that then the concept would have hit a lot harder. I'm not sure what you mean in the expo that Disney+ is where Beauty and the Beast lives; do you mean that's the only place you can stream it?

Hungreedy: Dilate/die late, pupil (tying into his name) made for an okay concept. The setup here wasn't nearly as clean as Student's. High grade meaning a student who gets high grades? Naaaahhhh. Bright ideas/dilating pupil, I see what you were going for here, although an idea doesn't exist as a visible object and therefore can't make your pupil dilate. I know that sounds pedantic, but it makes the concept not really make sense, so it didn't hit as hard as Student's did.

Clear win here for Student with a much stronger punch and better execution. Fair's in.

Kinda confused but one definitely took this clear and I will leave it at that. FVNH. 

both took rather uncreative approach to their bar conceptually. Seeing this go either way, but the nod imo goes to the one who finished better..

Another close one here but I got my winner edging this just by personal preference. Good luck yall

Felt one schemes flowed well amd hit well while the other struggled with set ups and the execution 

Ive got my winner here. Both had a good string of the concept throughout the one bar. Ive got one being slightly more smooth here. But both of yall have improved a ton since I last read your battles so props.

fairs in

This was close, both sides came with a good concept and stuck with it throughout the bar. The punch is the deciding factor and in this one I'm going to give it to HB, I thought the pupils dilate was clever and it ultimately was what won me over. Close battle here you two.

HB was better in every area.

Concept flow punches setups. Nothing super crazy but clear winner

 fv nh 

I gotta give a shout to Beast for the concept. Really well done and smooth as butter off the tongue.