Welcome to 2023's One Bar Championship. You both have three days to wrire and submit your One Bar. Your One Bar must not exceed 220 characters. If it does, you will be DQ'ed. 

Best of luck gentlemen. 

One was cleaner with his execution and concepts in this one. Fairs in, gents. Best of luck in next round. 

Con u had a preety clever bar which was mad with the freshness in terms of concepts and wp but i just feel purps hit harder with his multi heavy peice that had some sinister intent and solid wp also .

fairs in gents 

TYPO: PURPLE IS FOR *FAGGETS* not "FAGGET"

I think one had heavier material and had harder jabs with better set ups, the other had a good idea but couldve executed their concept better imo so i have my winner here and fv is tossed. 

One had better multis and set up.  Both concepts were ok. 

fair vote in 

Console/ Switch

affliction t Shirt brand 

cc: 218

A sai is the three-pointed dagger the ninja turtle Rafael uses. 

Donatello's color is purple and he is the nerdy one with gadgets 

Purple mattress has a square grid pattern.

"Eric is embarrassed he got hurdled" he's a midget

Purps: Great rhyming throughout. Console disappear seemed like it was leading into a clever bar, but then the punchline didn't go anywhere - how would you take a switch and make it become a Wesson? As for the ending punch, I've personally never heard of Afflictions so I had to read the expo, which takes away from the punch. It's also kinda silly to assume that your opponent wears that brand of T-shirts. Not a terrible bar by any means but definitely flawed, and the punches lagged way behind the execution.

Concise: You swapped between two different but similar rhyme schemes here, which hurt the readability of your bar pretty badly. I was not feeling the ending punch at all. Purple mattress was eeeehhhhhhhhh.

I had Purps winning this with a more sensible (although by no means great) punch and much better execution. Fair's in.

This was good but I liked ones punch n flow more  but both was good jus favor ones much better personally 

I think one had a better in between but my winner was overall solid. Neither drop was bad. One just was more honed in. FVNH.

this was a good one. simply put I thought one was just more coherent and didnt really make me need to see the expo.

Purps's complexity & rhyming shined through here, although I agree with Shodan's breakdown, not the best punches per say. Concise had potential, purple mattress but worded "less on the nose" but the TMNT references were too abstract, weren't tied together with a punch, so they fell short here.

Purps wins for at least having a punchline in a 1 bar battle. 

Yet another expo is needed apparently

"Tri me on for sai's" (He's a midget)

"Eric was embarrassed. He got hurdled in the brackets" (midget was embarrassed he got jumped over)

" But if these walls could talk, they'd say purple is for faggets"

because that's even more embarrassing. 

Easy choice here.my choice had the better concept and had better execution. The loser was still good just not as creative 

I have Purps taking this one, good multis and the punch at the end was nice. I also liked the name flip, that was nice. Fair vote in, no hate.

Nothing much to say, but GL to the one who advances im going with the one that stood out and resignated the most... so on that note MAY THE BAR PREVAIL!

Felt ones concepts drove home neatly than the other here and didn't have much impact 

Lol props to purps