Welcome to 2023's One Bar Championship. You both have three days to wrire and submit your One Bar. Your One Bar must not exceed 220 characters. If it does, you will be DQ'ed. 

Best of luck gentlemen. 

The execution was extremely bad on both sides in this one. Ones bar was executed slightly better than the other. Whoever goes through, needs to really step it up.

GG was just plain savage here makin use of the personal plays well , deathstro came again had the ideas , the Krang and stomach brains ideas was ill just you ended the punch with a x 1 rhyme scheme , u needed something to rhyme with Gucci to at least bump up the flow a bit . FV lads 

one had more content and set up a punch, had multis yeah so MAY THE BEST BAR WIN!

Got my winner here based on flow/multis and being more solid with the technicals. Both had cool concepts, the delivery is what tilted it to the winner for me. 

Both bars were very poorly executed imo. I actually liked DeathstroSmoke's concept better but the rhyming was so bad that I feel like I have to give it to TGG. Fair's in.

I think ones set and punch was a little better, the other needs to be more clearer and fix up on his setups better but both had good ideas i got my winner fv is in

Felt one was jus better in more categories fairs in cool spar think both should work on something's tho 

Quick Expo 

I-95 is the major interestate between our city's. 

Murchinson is a well know street in the Ville 

Amityville dn't think I need an expo for that

Good shit Smoke 

Well, one hardly put in any effort .. shame because its only a ONE BAR tourney... and the other had too much filler in between multies... nonetheless got my winner.

Expected more from both tbh but giving this to Gauddy for his setup / multi use here, Deathstro had potential but didn't commit enough to one idea, Gucci Mane or Krang (TMNT villain).

TGG wrote his bar like it was a live battle and I kinda fw it. I liked the simplicity behind it and the personal approach was dope lol. Feel Death had the more accessible bar in terms of it relates more to people than TGG's but I got TGG with the W. Honestly not a bad battle. Think Death would do well to work on more complex rhyming than what he does especially in a 1 bar battle. It really shows in a confined space like this.

Very hard to choose here. Neither impressed. The winner of this needs to step it up next round. I liked TGG approach here but the structure threw it off for me. DS was smoother but could've been more creative 

Grimy punch here from my winner. Nice multi and love the horror movie reference. Not sure if the loser took this very serious or not. Fairs in

One had more in their bar which attacked their opponent. Both flowed well, multis on point. 

fair vote in 

TheGauddyGawd came in with an interesting concept, and connected his bar to form a solid-hitting punch. I've seen better from him but it wasn't bad & definitely outdid his opponent here.

DeathstroSmoke just came in very weak here. Didn't feel like it was a full bar, very simple conceptually speaking and the setup was just very poor. Felt like it didn't do much here compared to what his opponent had to offer.

I got Gauddy winning this. I will say Gaud the punch was nice but it was too much space between your main multis which made it not hit as hard. There should have been another main multi set in between the two somewhere to make it tie together. If you dont get what I mean PM me I'll explain. Death you could use some more creativity in the bars. Also in text battles the multi syllables should be a little more complex not just one word rhyme sets. You can get away with that in audio, but not text. 

Fairs in. 

This was a good battle, I liked both punches but I feel one had a slightly better punch and set up. Good shit to both, fair vote no hate.

one had the better set up and punch and the mulries to make it asll work.  no hate on the fair, just respect