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2022 Topical Tournament
Length: 40 Lines

S A L T (62%) Won

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Reppin: World, World, World

Concise (38%) Lost

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Reppin: Vallejo, California, United States

S A L T

<div><em>Discovered written within the scrolls found amongst the Dead Sea, dated 79 AD:</em></div>
<div>Signed, Octavian Vagus Flavius; An Account of Christ, on the Day that the Ashes Ravaged Us:</div>
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<div>"I am but a tactless vagabond—by no standard, spiritual. I've not prayed of any fashion nor portrayed any passion for the magic that's above; merely a tall tale for 3 year olds. Alas, perhaps I am actually wrong; for I have seen, the old Man of Miracles.</div>
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<div>He long had been gone: pegged to a cross for tempting the gods. Gathering the poor; preaching the scriptures embellishing them. Yet some would tell that he's not; like he had done Lazarus before; he had risen himself again. The man who had walked on the water & turned it to wine. The man who can stop a storm's squaller & return those who've died. To a lot, it's no more than fodder; not words one could buy. But now, a worn fossil; still firm for 85. His hair was long, colored marble; dirty, grey & white. His beard as far from his jaw bone, as his tall robes were, to serve an aging height. His face was calm, one that saw war—on a scourge to make things right.</div>
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<div>My family had scattered when the civil wars of the Four Emperors conspired to smite us. A useless whim. As my fellow Flavian, Vespasian would win it all, through which his short tenure bore us, the might of Titus: his ruthless kid. Not your average kin; a battle vet who'd killed in scores. Famed for a conquest of gruesomeness—a violent rape of the lands in Jerusalem, not 10 winters before. Torn temples to dust, igniting fires. From rats to men, to plants & kids; all put to sword—but one survivor. </div>
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<div>With my cousin the head of a regaining realm, I made my way t'ward Rome. It was there, upon the Mediterranian, we saw face to face afloat. Humble but for a gold cross he had been wearing; a fraying chain of rope. When I asked what his hope was when setting to sail, he said, 'from Pompey to Pompeii it goes.' & from then, I was weary on—for that, was the Flavian's home. As we docked to the port, I caught him before he walked off the shore. 'Those words,' I mentioned, 'could you explain, please?' He turned; 'God,was my work,' he beckoned, 'but soon it's of Hades.' </div>
<div>He pulled out a Bible, saying eery latin prose. A spectacle speech, that set Vesuvius blazing. If God had a roar—this were that of his tone. Retched temors released, set the whole world to quaking. I couldn't help but believe, as I lept in the sea—a tidal wave of seering blackened smoke, leaving my home burned & vacant."</div>

Concise

<div>My Wife is locked away, and her fate is grave... She's a slave of the state, but there has been a mistake...  </div>
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<div>I know she's not guilty, and I'm going to prove it if it kills me...</div>
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<div>I go to the courtroom to plead my case, but the guy behind the desk already seems irate, then I feel the earth shake, another tremor, this one feels like we're near the epicenter, and now he really starts to lose his temper.</div>
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<div>They tossed me out of the court room before noon, but as soon as I got up I was floored by a roaring boom. </div>
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<div>The sky and turned black and started spilling ash and debris in the streets, Blasted the trees and buildings, while the peeps try to flee and retreat.</div>
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<div>But I'm not leaving for the life of me until my wife is free, I open the desk and find the keys.</div>
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<div>I put the knife in my holster as I'm racing. I can smell the sulfur, I'm getting closer, while death is circling above like a vulture.</div>
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<div>I find her safe and we get away unscathed, then we make our way to sheltered place in a cave. </div>
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<div>I take off my clothes and show her my chode, she sucks it explodes then she swallows my load. she said arrivederci, your dick is so girthy, I'm going to need surgery, when you stick in the tip it hurts me.</div>
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Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2022-10-15 23:51:40).

Phroxen <LoD> Hall Of Famer I am Him 2x Grand Champion One Bar Legend Cypher Champion Scheme Champion Concept Champion One Bar Champion	Topic: You're in Pompeii when Mt. Vesuvius erupts. Verses due 10/15/22 @ 11:59PM. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-12 00:36:38
Phroxen <LoD> Hall Of Famer I am Him 2x Grand Champion One Bar Legend Cypher Champion Scheme Champion Concept Champion One Bar Champion	Seems like one handled this topic more seriously than the other. Fair's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-16 11:00:36
Óðinn <....> The Goatfather Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	Props to both making it this far. My winner used the concept better than the other here. Fairs in, gents. Best of luck to whoever goes through. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-17 13:37:23
Óðinn <....> The Goatfather Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	None expo vote removed. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-18 22:07:06
Óðinn <....> The Goatfather Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	F r o s t y's vote removed due to his request. Feels he voted wrong. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-18 22:08:23

Concise	Dope Posted on: 2022-10-12 00:37:36
Vitriolic <Chapter666> ChatterBox	I chose my winner for a more detailed and in-depth verse. Good writing from both sides just wish Chode had filled the box. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-16 11:02:51
Concise	Say what you want. I spend more time on this topic for than salt who posted his last topic verse. Then the last couple of lines added something about pompei. Posted on: 2022-10-16 12:17:10
Row <ANBU> 3x Topical Champion 2x One Bar Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion 4x LBT Champion	This was tough. Neither put the effort that's expected when being this close to the finals... One filled the box more. the other was easier to follow, slightly more entertaining.. ending was a wtf. I'm torn, but a winner must be chosen. I see it going either way. All the best to whoever makes it through. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-16 12:24:23
Enfinite <AC's>	Mmmmkay Posted on: 2022-10-16 23:27:36
G3P0 <WANTED>	SALT wins by default for filling the box more and having the overall more descriptive story. Was hoping from more from Chode ggz to both Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-17 01:16:12
ThaGauddyGawd <TGMXCFC> Premium Member Live Battler	One had more content related to the topic versus the other. FVNH. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-17 09:06:57
Masked-Reaper <Chapter666> Grand Champion 2x Premier League Champion Cypher Champion Scheme Champion The Demon	Felt both could have done better with the topic. Salt had a lot of god talk, then some about the topic.. Chode had some lines about the topic then finished with his girl sucking his dick... went with the verse I felt covered the topic better. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-17 13:06:23
LineStein <ILLVILL>	Im gonna go with salt, as I feel he was more in depth with the topic, chode you had a good verse here. you prolly will feel the same way I do seeing as you put time into your verse to make it good, but didnt prove as much content to the topic as salt did. good shit to both best of luck! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-17 17:58:36
Blue Hulk <....>	Ok I'm judging this battle based on rhymes and who flowed better since neither really related to the topic at hand. I got one based on that alone although it wasnt his best nor his opponent's. Good luck to whoever makes it to the final and props to the other for making it this far and not no-showing Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-18 17:08:32
LineStein <ILLVILL>	after much consideration, I am going to drop my vote for chode. A lot of story within the short amount of bars and after re reading a couple times, i have made my decision. good luck to both, and I also dig this topic wish I couldve done a verse with it on here. good shit yall! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-18 22:46:21
Student Staff Hall of Famer LB Historian LetsBeef Patriarch Creative Genius	My winner took this in almost all aspects, utilizing the Topic, vocab, storytelling, etc. Loser started off good but ended in an unrelated situation. Seems like one took it more seriously, props to both doe, keep elevating y'all! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2022-10-19 12:12:50