January 13th: Round Two Posting Deadline

19:00 EST (USA)

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Possible Expos: FightsAndRapsMedia = FARM, LoC/Lock, Brian Scalabrine is a horrible NBA player who played for the Bulls. Turnbull ACs. Kneed in the head. 

GL, TheDeterminator!

Typo-Lose test buttons to players not loose. 

expo-he has a cypher called "This Shit Is Wack", Microsoft Edge is a web browser, the ending statement is from a scene of Willy Wonka and da Chocolate Factory.

you too Edge GL

This was a good read, both battlers had some really nice lines but a lot of weaker points too. I think my winner got this reasonably comfortably with better consistency and creativity.

Edgeworth, your closer was simultaneously the best and worst bar in this entire battle. I have nothing else to say.

TheDeterminator, I think this is maybe your best verse to date. I was really impressed with a lot of your lines, the cypher post line was dope, the "he's toast" one was cool and the Microsoft Edge line was something I've never seen before that I quite liked (altho I think you could have improved your wording here). Overall, your creativity was on point as usual, keep working on turning a clever concept into a double-entendre and flipping it to expose the double meaning at the end of your line and you could become a real danger to anyone on the site.

Good luck to whoever wins this!

LoD.

I feel ones wording was much cleaner. Concepts from both were solid, have one edging it there with the way they were set up. Punches came cleaner from one as well. Have one winning this by a point. 

Oh he doomed

DT had a couple clever joints like the French bread line. Edge worth and grandpa joe lines were funny. Unfortunately there weren't consistent bangers throughout. Edgeworth...genitals real gayer? Yikes. Except for that, and personal feelings about dissing the white mamba Scalabrine aside, Edgeworth had the more well structured verse with better execution of conceptual punching. Leaning that way here. 

This was a close and surprising one. I think il have determinator winning this, because he came with some clever shit, and sweet punches. Good battle fairs in.

Edgeworth your opener made LOL. TD you definitely had some good moments, i expected less from you but you definitely showed up. I think the winner had a more polished verse, better structure, readability and his punches were more creative. Fairs in..

One obviously phoned it in here. And the other dropped material better than I was expecting. But, subsequently my winner's experience, and the execution of their concepts is what reigned them in the win for me here. By a narrower margin than I was initially expecting, though. 6-5 Edgeworth. 

I had ya girl workin the deepthroat, even heard her NECK SNAPPIN

^^ thats was some saaxxx baba love right there LMAO. Pretty entertaining verse all around by edge here pretty witty and heavy punches too here and there. that LOC shit was BOTB for me. The determinator started off slow but made up for it with the cypher punch (i always dig personal punches) the microsof edge kinda fell flat tho should have been, wording issues. the edge worth wordplay is really difficult to frame and deliver simplistically which is why most folks dnt do it, you should have googled what edgeworth means to be better equipped to do it like i think i saw Rai doing once. (edgeworth in a box something) the closer was'nt much punch wise either. overall i got edge taking this with better worded jabs and punches with a lot of appreciation for determinator for pushing it to the best of his ability which will get better soon.

Oof this battle was kinda of lacking, a bunch of gay jokes and light jabs. I'm sure y'all can do better than this. Had to almost force myself to read it tbh. Anyway the winner takes it here with a better structure and some better punching. Not impressed tbh. At least y'all showed up. Ggs 

Edge: the openers were light but funny admittedly. (Real Gayer?) the farm punch was good and the rest was ok. The closer was.... um yeah lol. Of course this is light work but lampshading this doesn't help. Maybe you did just enough to get the job done.

Terminator: not sure if the KO 3-0 bar was a punch. Reading the rest of your verse it's pretty simplistic but I'm deffo seeing sparks in you (the Microsoft edge bar is a great idea, keep improvung your execution). You really lost steam in the second half. Your closer doesn't have metaphorical significance outside a quote. But like I said keep working and I can see you making a mark here. Edge did a little more then enough to win.

LoD