January 13th: Round Two Posting Deadline

19:00 EST (USA)

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Trans/tranvestite. We don't talk about fight club/never gets mentioned. 

It's DedSec!

♤♧DEDSEC♧♤

Got my winner easily here. Fairs in. 1/

DEDSEC!

i felt both were alright here i felt one was more creative in someway both were funny but i felt one was funnier in his last line. Loser was basic the winner had a couple more hits ...not great but not bad. fv no h8 ....gl Auto and DC

This is one sided gotta go wit graph on this he clearly prepared for round 2 of a GC championship tournament child decent attempt but I can tell you weren't hungry.......competing in text during a tournament 2 syllable structure just not gonna cut it there are other thing's going on here as well Iike lack of complexity, punches, relevance, and a slew of other things. Graph clearly wanted it and did a much better job tho against an opponent who is leveled up you have to step it up or it might be curtains for you. Much respect to both my fair is in

Autograph with the clear W here. Better written verse. Superior rhyming and punches with a use of setups and more creative concepts. Different Child very simple rhyming, not really putting any creativity into how he's dissing his opponent. Direct and simple can be good but it needs to have more to it than this. 

DEDSEC!!!!

Auto: that automotive bar was dope asf. The verse overall was pretty clean but them closers were boo boo. but still, Solid bars

Child:you deffo got rhyming  down and you stayed on topic with disses. Other than that just some basic stuff. Try bigger multi syllable lines and read more battles to get how to setup complex punchlines and wordplays. Good shit. 

Ultimately this was a bit of a whitewash for Auto. Complex multis and basic but clean punches throughout. Auto I could tell you weren't trying your hardest with a lot of filler here, and some really played punches (trans mission is way too overdone lol) but that actually made it really clean because nothing felt forced due to attempts at overcomplication. Every multi here made sense and sounded natural, try to keep that the case even when you're making your concepts more complex.

DifferentChild for the most part you had 1 or 2 syllable rhymes and no real punchlines with double entendres to speak of. Try to read up battles from some of the site heavyweights, I'd recommend Rieper as one of the more active at the moment, to see how you should be structuring your punches.

Got Auto taking this one with ease more or less. His rhyming was smoother, his concepts were more thought out, fresher, and advanced and I think DC using almost entirely 2 syllable rhymes was just basically a suicide here. 

Autograph had some depressingly played punches like Mario Kart and other lows like a self-nameplay, which I hate, but at least there were real concepts with double meanings throughout. DifferentChild was aggressive and had some basic multies, but stylistically his verse was pretty much a cypher, so he had no chance of winning here. Fair's in.

My winner's punch strength was a little inconsistent at times. But, I can imagine this wasn't their best. My loser has some of the fundamentals down, but, could take pointers from their opponent to break into that next tier of writing. 6-5 Auto. 

Not gonna really get into a deep expo here my winner takes it with a more sophisticated drop, something that a sophisticated pallet as mine can enjoy. Pause

I think auto pretty much bodied the battle with his ciggerette after sex and mario kart lines iteself. different child was much much better than what i have seen of him in the past but lacked the conceptual and wordplay flips and punchlines which made his verse seem bland but with a much smoother rhyming this time. the closer by auto though, damn man even tho it was an attempted personal shit is played out to the point of being comparable to dafeat bars man. lol anyways fairs in. 

BOTB btw - 

Jay Z is basic but he still gets the juice and I can't get juice.

You say that to beyonce and you will know lol 

Fair votes in, good battle fellas

I'm going with Auto here. Auto had some good bars, I like the cigarette after sex line and hit and run. Different, you. Did good but you didnt have complexity or being direct with your punches. For a audio battle its smooth, cause I know ppl who use texts verses for audios and its just terribly drawn out. You were smooth but didnt have the strong punch count like auto. Good stuff tho fellas