This wasn't bad at all. Nyvilly had a simple and straightforward approach. I felt like the concepts themselves weren't the most outside the box but the execution of them was fairly good. Tightening up the wording in the setups, incorporating an obvious idiom or other plays when possible, would boost impact a lot. Bnas....you gotta slow down and write like this more often. It's clear you took a little more time on this than a forum battle. You had some funny stuff in there, some simple little well executed jabs and the wording is more coherent. You could benefit from letting your best ideas develop over a line or two...it helps with the impact when you build toward something. Got a winner here and good luck to whoever wins. 

Both done their thing here, feel one took this with constitent hits and fresher and better executed concepts. Fairs in, i'm out. Good luck to whoever goes through. 

January 7th: Round One Posting Deadline

19:00 EST (USA)

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Expo: NA means not available. 

          Nissan versa is a car

          Farmers make raw materials 

Ummmm I think that's it, any questions just ask. Good look BNAS

Wasn't gonna post but sat myself down for 40 minutes tonight and got with it. Dope drop fam. Wish more dudes posted, gonna be alot of DQs

I got one winning this with the better concepts. Felt both had a lot of buildups that were two long before getting to the tag lines but I do feel ones verse was overall, stronger than the others. 

Awesome bout here, an absolutely stomp to be honest. One completely outclassed the other with fresher concepts, setups and execution and to top it off the winners scheme flowed extremely fluent. Fairs in

Nice spar here guys, both had there moments but one was more consistantly hitting imo. 1/

Dope drop BNAS! Good luck. Hope more ppl show :-(

Tbh this was pretty close. Nyvilly stuck to simpler schemes, which let him broaden his lines a bit, and toughen them up. Bnas tried bring a bit more complexity but I felt like he fell short a lot of the time. My vote is going to Nyvilly for better usage of his schemes, and harder hitting punches.

Pleasantly surprised with Nyvilly here. Felt he got this with the much cleaner writing and wording as fresh creative punches. Bnas respects for getting the verse in like you said in the comments, but Nyvilly dropped a super clean verse here and as soon as I read "I let the CONFETTI INVEST YALL" I pretty much knew it was a wrap. That Diaz line was alright though.

VILLY 'SEEING' is his man's own body print at the CHILLY 'SCENE 

Broken multie^^^

I expected more here. But in the end I felt one had more consistency punching, even though it was hard to follow at times. Fairs in.

MURDER.

loved the punches from nyvilly very complete crisp personal and fresh also it was surpricingly nice to see Bnas grace a tourney battle with his presence for a change too something he can really excel at if he wishes to anyways this was one of the best i have seen from him the murda muzik shit was a dope punch overall a lil too high on self hype in certain areas but a pretty decent verses overall just that Nyvilly's highs were much higher and had no lows at all coz of his consistency which gets him my vote here. both had that old school flava tho something i always like to read. good battle guys.

i think both did pretty well here. Nyvilly that more code verse was fire i liked incorporating complex ideas and just executing them in ya own way. Bnas improving here i think its one of his best performances. i think ur best bar was the dublin murders. i got my winner edging this though. fairs in.

I thought this was a close battle that could go either way. Both battlers had some nice bars but were incomplete at some other points. Ultimately my vote went to the verse I thought had higher highs and more consistency.

Nyvilly I liked your opener, and thought it was probably botb. However, at times your multis seemed a bit forced. "Jaws ethereal" technically makes sense, but it doesn't sound like something anyone would actually say. Also, I'm not quite sure what would happen to Bnas after he had his "neck smothered", since smothering only really works on the mouth afaik. Things like this took away from the readibility and impact of your verse, despite having some dope punches.

Bnas I think this might be the best verse I remember reading from you. I thought your bar ending in "show n tell" was pretty cool, definitely your best bar although you had some other nice ones as well. However, like Nyvilly, you had some weird fucking multis in here man. What does "I let the confetti invest yall" mean? Genuinely I do not have any idea what this is. Also, when you described your girl as "long", the only possible explanation I could think of (even after asking other people) is that you're saying she has a big dick. No hate if she does, but somehow I doubt that's what you meant. Try to make sure you choose your words carefully going forwards.

Good luck to whoever progresses here, and thanks for an interesting battle.